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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, At the Rift from the Back of My Mind, presents the inner turbulence that daily pushes at the gates of sanity and is contained with great resolve. The anguish, anger, and hatred, if allowed release in any other than a crack of steam, might well invert the world forever. It is an act of will that keeps the body and soul together.
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This poem, At the Rift from the Back of My Mind, presents the inner turbulence that daily pushes at the gates of sanity and is contained with great resolve. The anguish, anger, and hatred, if allowed release in any other than a crack of steam, might well invert the world forever. It is an act of will that keeps the body and soul together.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
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Thanks Bill glad you enjoyed this.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Zue65
Again you created a poem that truly defines you as a poet. Thus piece is a signature poem that carries the stamp of the author, that if the readers read this, they will immediately recognize it's Ricky1024's unique poetic style. You are the only one in FanStory employing this poetic format. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless.
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Again you created a poem that truly defines you as a poet. Thus piece is a signature poem that carries the stamp of the author, that if the readers read this, they will immediately recognize it's Ricky1024's unique poetic style. You are the only one in FanStory employing this poetic format. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
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Jana me so much with this my dear thanks talk to Ricky 1024 be sure to read my latest post about my son Jason written from above dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Sugarray77
You have written a powerful poem full of strong emotion. Your verses are well-written and convey your message clearly. Thanks for sharing this with us. Well done.
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You have written a powerful poem full of strong emotion. Your verses are well-written and convey your message clearly. Thanks for sharing this with us. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from robina1978
An excellent picture, that complements your poem very well. It rhymes a lot. Also some other devices. Very good general layout. It reads well, and reviews very well. Thanks for sharing.
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An excellent picture, that complements your poem very well. It rhymes a lot. Also some other devices. Very good general layout. It reads well, and reviews very well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
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This was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from jenintorre
This is an incredibly profound poem. My heart goes out to you because of your loss and realize that nothing can comfort you. I loved your rhyme and rhythm in this poem. So well crafted. Blessings. Jen.
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This is an incredibly profound poem. My heart goes out to you because of your loss and realize that nothing can comfort you. I loved your rhyme and rhythm in this poem. So well crafted. Blessings. Jen.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
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Thanks my dear I'm glad you understood it some people when I write about some subjects about my son our way passing away it more or less insulting bores them by telling me I have to move on with my life and not live in the past I don't live in the past I have moved all of my life is spent 15 years but it always helps to journal talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Gulbahar Sidhu
Hi Ricky
A poem wrapped in so many layers of meaning. I had to read it 5 or 6 times to get the feel of your wonderful poem. A great idea expressed powerfully. Congratulations for this gem of a poem.
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Hi Ricky
A poem wrapped in so many layers of meaning. I had to read it 5 or 6 times to get the feel of your wonderful poem. A great idea expressed powerfully. Congratulations for this gem of a poem.
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Just a thought I've been playing with it in my head for a while and I decide to bring it forth.
Thanks,
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from nomi338
The sudden and unexpected death of a child can bring about sadness, anger, depression and so many questions that can never be satisfactorily answered. Despite any actions that we can and do take, it will never result in that once coming back to us in this life. We can only strive to remember them is the best ways possible. This post is very powerful and it expresses much feeling with conviction.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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The sudden and unexpected death of a child can bring about sadness, anger, depression and so many questions that can never be satisfactorily answered. Despite any actions that we can and do take, it will never result in that once coming back to us in this life. We can only strive to remember them is the best ways possible. This post is very powerful and it expresses much feeling with conviction.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks Nomi for this wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024. I
Comment from Gloria ....
What struck me instantly in this poem, Dr Ricky is the presentation is quite lovely which stands in stark contrast to the unresolved cavernous, cancerous and danger anger. You've used some excellent poetic devices too.
Thank you for sharing my friend.
Gloria
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What struck me instantly in this poem, Dr Ricky is the presentation is quite lovely which stands in stark contrast to the unresolved cavernous, cancerous and danger anger. You've used some excellent poetic devices too.
Thank you for sharing my friend.
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
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Guess Gloria my poetic devices seem to be turned on non stop these days rumbling through my brain like a train out of control completely insane don't call me crazy that's not right and scene is better thanks dr. Ricky 1024 for your review she's number one
Comment from LIJ Red
Research shows that generals who lost sons in battle brought a new kind of Hell to war. Monsters of the id are very much with us. Excellent post.
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Research shows that generals who lost sons in battle brought a new kind of Hell to war. Monsters of the id are very much with us. Excellent post.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
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I don't look at myself as a general since I lost my son and him can bring all held a battle but if anybody pisses me off it will come out and they will have to fear the Beast thanks for this review dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
The line I put below is one that I resonate with from my abuse. No one should ever feel this way and yet there are many who can relate to this. I hope writing is therapeutic for you. I know it is for me.
"So, I try not to oxygenate but suffocate..
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The line I put below is one that I resonate with from my abuse. No one should ever feel this way and yet there are many who can relate to this. I hope writing is therapeutic for you. I know it is for me.
"So, I try not to oxygenate but suffocate..
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your time but I can't go on your site cuz I'm muted to find out whether your male or female want to come see your abuse talk to Ricky 1024
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You should be unmuted. No lie, I can't remember why I muted you.
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Thanks dr. Ricky 1024
