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Comment from misscookie
Exceptional
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I'm please I had a star left
It was waiting just for you
This is the most heartfelt poem I read to day
I could sense the love compassion and the pain within each line
Yet my friend the day will come and you will be with your son.
God bless and thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
    Thanks my Dear but I was ready..
    Back in '06.
    Dr.Ricky....
reply by misscookie on 28-Jan-2018
    You're v ery welcome
    Take care
    Cookie
Comment from artisart4u
Exceptional
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This is so emotional. Through donations the person can live on through another. As they say "to give your life for another" is very honorable in the military and being a donor is like that to me.
You wrote it in a very nice caring way.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    And thanks for your wonderful review and time Art.
    Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from MSJVClarke
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This poem, as your others, continue to pay tribute to your undying love for your son. Your endurance of your grief for such a loss that no one but you can truly feel stirs the emotions of us that read your poetry and I cannot imagine such a loss. I hope these poems are slowly but gradually healing you as they keep your son alive. My prayers for your healing.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    Thanks for your wonderful review and time.
    Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from Trudi Perkins
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This is a very beautiful poem to and about your son. I can feel your pain and passion.Thanks for sharing your craft with us. God bless you Ricky.Great job!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    I thank you so much sweetie for stopping by and the next poem Jason's Part B to his mother dedicated poem comes next Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from robyn corum
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Ricky,

This is one of the best posts of yours I have read recently - which is saying a lot, because you've had a couple of really good posts lately. The wording here was sensitive and sweet. Thanks for sharing!!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    Thanks Robin and second dedicated poem for my wife and Jason's mother comes next after Ricky 1024
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Abslutely because as long as we have memories, they will live and be with us forever. Very thought provoking and well done

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    Thanks Barbara and the bee poem dedication to Carolyn comes next Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like the style, flow, and message of this. Everything flows so well together. Those are good questions to ask. Thanks for sharing this. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    Thanks Jeff this means a lot to me as well as my past wife Carolyn and my son Jason her dedicated piece was and is now next talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Cindy Warren
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I believe we will see our loved ones again. Jay sounds wonderful. He donated his heart so someone else could live. He'd want you to live and be happy too. I've signed my organ donor card too. I think we should all do what we can.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
    Thanks Cindy for your beautiful and wonderful time and review Jason's name of his band was before he passed away four ways to save and that's exactly what he did three still alive today dr. Ricky 1024