Hate Speaks
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very powerful poem that describes hate so vividly that it
seems like a live ultra-evil entity. You have made effective use of specifics
in this "character sketch" of hate.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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This is a very powerful poem that describes hate so vividly that it
seems like a live ultra-evil entity. You have made effective use of specifics
in this "character sketch" of hate.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem, I really appreciate it.
Comment from Bichon
Hate is not a nice thing, but sadly it resides in all of us. Great poem that was an easy read with a nice flow. Best of luck in the contest with the one, it was great.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hate is not a nice thing, but sadly it resides in all of us. Great poem that was an easy read with a nice flow. Best of luck in the contest with the one, it was great.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thanks for this great review, and for taking time to read my work.
Comment from TheStoryMan
Hatred is evil and its abundant in this country - out of control and spreading - its a disease and the politicians are the root of it - taking God away and declaring war on Christians - its sad times - and your poem brings the reality of whats going on - thanks for sharing - respectfully Ron
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hatred is evil and its abundant in this country - out of control and spreading - its a disease and the politicians are the root of it - taking God away and declaring war on Christians - its sad times - and your poem brings the reality of whats going on - thanks for sharing - respectfully Ron
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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I agree with you I'm sad to say. Thank you for reading.
Comment from QC Poet
Positively negative flow to theme and out look. All technical aspects soundly constructed with dark themes and accompanying writting images.
Good Luck if entered in a contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Positively negative flow to theme and out look. All technical aspects soundly constructed with dark themes and accompanying writting images.
Good Luck if entered in a contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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The contest is past, but I'm so grateful that I'm getting a lot of positive feedback for my poem. Thank you.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Boogienights. It was very powerful and dark, and I loved it. The flow was good as was the imagery and the ending was perfect. Nice job.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, Boogienights. It was very powerful and dark, and I loved it. The flow was good as was the imagery and the ending was perfect. Nice job.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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I'm so glad you liked it and for taking time to read my poem... thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Hate Speaks", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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"Hate Speaks", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for your kind words and for taking time to read my work, I really appreciate it.
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Boogienights, as always you're more than welcome.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from susand3022
Hi Boogienights, I like your poem, I think it's great, even though it has to do, with a thing like hate! ... Hey... that rhymes! I think this is very well said... it does creep into everything, everywhere, and it doesn't ever want to let go, does it.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Hi Boogienights, I like your poem, I think it's great, even though it has to do, with a thing like hate! ... Hey... that rhymes! I think this is very well said... it does creep into everything, everywhere, and it doesn't ever want to let go, does it.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for reading, and for your kind words.
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
This is an exceptional poem. it certainly deserves six stars if I had them to give. Your presentation with the artwork and black background with white lettering is very good. I like the way you repeated I Am Hate and then went on in the next verse to describe where hate is found. You are very talented. Best of luck in the Poem of the Month contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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This is an exceptional poem. it certainly deserves six stars if I had them to give. Your presentation with the artwork and black background with white lettering is very good. I like the way you repeated I Am Hate and then went on in the next verse to describe where hate is found. You are very talented. Best of luck in the Poem of the Month contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it means a lot to me.
Comment from Suzie Q
This was amazing! You described every aspect of hate perfectly. Using the line " I am hate" intermittingly the way you did here is very effective. I especially liked " trap your soul until your heart's an empty hole" Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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This was amazing! You described every aspect of hate perfectly. Using the line " I am hate" intermittingly the way you did here is very effective. I especially liked " trap your soul until your heart's an empty hole" Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Wow! Thank you so much for the six stars, it means the world to me. I'm so glad you liked my poem.
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You're welcome
Comment from Dean Kuch
I can easily see why this scathing poetic tirade was selected by the staff here at Fanstory for a Poem of the Month contest entry, Pam.
It sneaks up on ya' and hits you with a sucker-punch squarely in the solar plexus.
The emotion of hate is like a cancer, eating away at us from the inside out.
The only ones we wind up hurting when we hate someone in the end is ourselves.
Best just to let it go and let bygones be bygones.
Nicely penned!
~Dean
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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I can easily see why this scathing poetic tirade was selected by the staff here at Fanstory for a Poem of the Month contest entry, Pam.
It sneaks up on ya' and hits you with a sucker-punch squarely in the solar plexus.
The emotion of hate is like a cancer, eating away at us from the inside out.
The only ones we wind up hurting when we hate someone in the end is ourselves.
Best just to let it go and let bygones be bygones.
Nicely penned!
~Dean
Comment Written 16-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this great review. It means a lot to me coming from someone whose work I admire.
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You are more than welcome, Pam.
Wonderfully well penned.
~Dean
