The Wild Winds
A Duo-Rhyme Poem for Potlatch39 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I've never got a six left when I want one. This poem is superb, Yvonne, I just love the rhyme style, and it's flawless in it's presentation. Reading aloud, I didn't stumble once in the change over, it was a smooth as silk. The winds are playing us up today, not nice at all. Well done, my friend. I enjoyed reading this delightful poem. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I've never got a six left when I want one. This poem is superb, Yvonne, I just love the rhyme style, and it's flawless in it's presentation. Reading aloud, I didn't stumble once in the change over, it was a smooth as silk. The winds are playing us up today, not nice at all. Well done, my friend. I enjoyed reading this delightful poem. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you. You always make me feel so good. 8-)
Comment from Boogienights
As I read your poem, I could feel the storm raging in all it's glory. You describe the fury of it all perfectly and I thought that you really captured nature in its most savage form. Great writing, I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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As I read your poem, I could feel the storm raging in all it's glory. You describe the fury of it all perfectly and I thought that you really captured nature in its most savage form. Great writing, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate you saying that.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written duo-rhyme and a great subject choice. Your rhymes work well and bring a message of not being free from fear no matter how dangerous things seem to be.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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A very well-written duo-rhyme and a great subject choice. Your rhymes work well and bring a message of not being free from fear no matter how dangerous things seem to be.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you. I love a storm as long as it does no damage or knock out the power. 8-)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, this is wonderful! I doubt I would try to write this form though - not with that presentation. I have tried many times to manually space over, and it won't do it for me - not since my first year as a member.
One more quirk that seems exclusive to my account.
I loved your poem, though, Yvonne - the imagery it evokes is spectacular!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Oh, this is wonderful! I doubt I would try to write this form though - not with that presentation. I have tried many times to manually space over, and it won't do it for me - not since my first year as a member.
One more quirk that seems exclusive to my account.
I loved your poem, though, Yvonne - the imagery it evokes is spectacular!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Oh, go ahead and try it. You don't have to space over. That's optional. Thank you for a lovely review.
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Might, thanks. :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
I really enjoyed your rendition of Mary L. Port's Duo-rhyme poem, Yvonne.
There are many great examples of assonance, consonance and alliteration scattered all throughout.
The rhyming is impeccable.
The onomatopoeia creates a storm-like effect , which is perfect for the topic you've chosen.
Outstanding!
~Dean
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I really enjoyed your rendition of Mary L. Port's Duo-rhyme poem, Yvonne.
There are many great examples of assonance, consonance and alliteration scattered all throughout.
The rhyming is impeccable.
The onomatopoeia creates a storm-like effect , which is perfect for the topic you've chosen.
Outstanding!
~Dean
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much, Dean. I appreciate your lovely comments.
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U R welcome.
Comment from frierajac
You have done a good job with this formatted rhyme scheme. I haven't had time and also found this one trying. You have made the natural event vivid and lasting which is all one can hope for.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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You have done a good job with this formatted rhyme scheme. I haven't had time and also found this one trying. You have made the natural event vivid and lasting which is all one can hope for.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you for saying that. I hoped it would give that feeling. It's not as hard as it looks. Try one. 8-)
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We'll see about that
Comment from LIJ Red
The hills break up winds with a long fetch, so our wickedest storms are little pop-up thunderstorms that go bowling down the hollows. With all these trees, I dread any of them. Looks like an excellent six-line-middle duo rhyme.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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The hills break up winds with a long fetch, so our wickedest storms are little pop-up thunderstorms that go bowling down the hollows. With all these trees, I dread any of them. Looks like an excellent six-line-middle duo rhyme.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I know what you mean. I felt that way when I lived in the woods. But I like a harmless thunder-boomer. 8-)
Comment from smileycloud
very nice indeed
the story in a poem has well represented strong emotional content
the rhyme scheme is perfect
the intricate style/form is very well done my friend
have a smiley day
blessings
love the positive "let's get on with it" attitude in the last line
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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very nice indeed
the story in a poem has well represented strong emotional content
the rhyme scheme is perfect
the intricate style/form is very well done my friend
have a smiley day
blessings
love the positive "let's get on with it" attitude in the last line
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I'll certainly have a smiley day after this wonderful review. Thank you so much. 8-)
Comment from Gloria ....
Just beautiful, Yvonne. The wind is such a powerful force and I must admit it is one of nature's set of circumstance that somewhat frightens me.
A beautiful poem with lots of emotion.
Great job!
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Just beautiful, Yvonne. The wind is such a powerful force and I must admit it is one of nature's set of circumstance that somewhat frightens me.
A beautiful poem with lots of emotion.
Great job!
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you for such wonderful remarks. I'm glad you felt it, too. 8-)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well done with your duo rhyme verse Yvonne.
You've really put us into the eye of the storm with the descriptive middle rhyme lines. This is a lovely form to read, haven't tried mine yet,
well done.
cheers.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Well done with your duo rhyme verse Yvonne.
You've really put us into the eye of the storm with the descriptive middle rhyme lines. This is a lovely form to read, haven't tried mine yet,
well done.
cheers.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this great review. Get on it, girl. I'll be looking for yours. 8-)
