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Tadpoles

Poem 5/7/5

3 total reviews 
Comment from c_lucas
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Though low on the food chart, Mother Nature has a use for the tadpole. Nature has a use for all of its species. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
    Yes indeed interesting creatures ..thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Nice is this poem speaks the Law of Nature and how Mother Nature renews her contract; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
    Thanks for critique zanya
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem about the tadpoles. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the picture. When I was young I would collect tadpoles and put them back in the water! Brought back some good memories! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
    Yes interesting creatures ..thanks for reading zanya