The Dare
Flash fiction15 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I,love this flash fiction entry in this contest. What a wonderfully engineered twist to this fascinating tale of our hero and a mocking "friend", and Lo and behold there is some poetic justice...Kera is missing, well done, good job, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
I,love this flash fiction entry in this contest. What a wonderfully engineered twist to this fascinating tale of our hero and a mocking "friend", and Lo and behold there is some poetic justice...Kera is missing, well done, good job, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much, Roy. Enjoy trying to cut words down to these short stories.
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Well done
Comment from Wetbelly01
Wow!... Neat piece you've got there...
I LIKE IT!... Didn't see any problems with it at all...
I would think it will do well in the contest...
My compliments and Good Luck!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
Wow!... Neat piece you've got there...
I LIKE IT!... Didn't see any problems with it at all...
I would think it will do well in the contest...
My compliments and Good Luck!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is a it bit scary and we dice with death and think we've won and then this happens, he he he, I enjoyed your flash fiction, good luck with it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
Oh my goodness this is a it bit scary and we dice with death and think we've won and then this happens, he he he, I enjoyed your flash fiction, good luck with it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the '100 Word Flash Fiction' writing prompt.
Well told with a nice twist at the end.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
This is a good entry for the '100 Word Flash Fiction' writing prompt.
Well told with a nice twist at the end.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Many thanks for your review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I don't think I could run through a grave yard at night, especially if the weather was bad. I'd be scared out of my mind. This is a really good flash fiction story with a very creepy ending. Well done a and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
I don't think I could run through a grave yard at night, especially if the weather was bad. I'd be scared out of my mind. This is a really good flash fiction story with a very creepy ending. Well done a and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks much. For some reason these little short ones are a challenging bit of fun.