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Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Hello there again, Ricky: I totally appreciated this poem. There is so much about the color blue, you are so right about this. You have mentioned much about this color which is also the feeling that we keep feeling about our loss loves. it is also the sad music that we hear that makes us stay in that feeling of blue. Then it is the sky above that makes us look up to God who will comfort us for the way we feel when we are down.

Thank you for sharing this great poem. It is awesome and it gave me some really great thoughts. (smiling)

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
    I'm going to rewrite it cuz I want to add some more things like a blue topaz turquoise jewelry things like that doctor Ricky 10:24 thanks
Comment from royowen
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The colour blue means a lot of things to a lot of people, but to you it means a special tragedy, which obviously is a strong therapeutic journey, once again, beautifully written effort Ricky, in this unique prose like manner that you do, well done, blesings, Roy

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thomas Bowlings the expert novelist Dean Kul ch is the expert horror specialist mail Nia Sawyer's is expert Hollis female Barbara Henderson is the expert poet female Margaret Snowdon is the expert novelist female all these peoples have their own speciality or Nish did they manage to find within their life I believe mine is a combination of all those things which I pull into my mind then into my heart through my soul from a far far above talk to Ricky 1024 thanks for your review
reply by royowen on 23-Jan-2018
    Well done
Comment from Sherman541
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I truly like this Blue. My online gaming name is Blue and it was derived from the feelings of being blue. I was very sad and when I made the character, Blue was the only thing I could think of for my name. Blue is also my favorite color and my eyes are also blue. I love the way this rhymes and the words all seem to flow together, like music. Your writing has beautifully fallen into place. Sherman

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks, glad you found this one and thanks for your beautiful and wonderful review has always talked to Ricky 1024
reply by Sherman541 on 23-Jan-2018
    you are welcome - it seemed to be my color and my favorite aka name too :)
Comment from misscookie
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This is a very interesting poem about the color blue
You captured my attention from the start
In so cases I can relate
thank you for sharing this colorful write.
Cookie

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Amish cookie I'm so happy that you found this one that you like to talk to Ricky 10:24 and welcome to my house and suffering here on fan story
reply by misscookie on 23-Jan-2018
    I'm so sorry you are not happy on fan story... you said you are suffering on it.
    I hop[e n time you will enjoy it as much as so many member do
    Cookie
Comment from Bryantfox
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Totally Awesome my heavenly gifted and poetic friend!!! I love how you keep faithful in encouraging others while you face your sadness but your precious son. Is with our glorious Lord! So allow your heart to be
Filled with his gladness!
My condolences. I love you my brother in CHRIST

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this Brian Fox and welcome to my house is suffering here on fanstory dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from jppoet
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Hi Ricky, this glorious poem does honor to the color of blue --my favorite too-- and is in artistic affinity with the lovely photo. Your poem did wash away some blues I had before reading it. God Bless You, john

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    I'm so always glad to Comedy I've heard this before where my grieving all sets other people grieving and pain one of them actually who had lost their child in the car accident but it was a female teenager who had her head decapitated said if it wasn't for my writing she would have left this site a long time ago thanks dr. Ricky 1024 and welcome to my house of suffering
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Ricky. I think the color blue is also enlightening and the way you wrote this ending up feeling good instead of bad for the color blue. Great writing. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Guaymas kiwi I'm so so glad you enjoyed the color of blue it's my favorite color to the doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks poet finds, feels everything blue, just blue and blue, everything including his blood; sadness engulfed; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Thanks Al Creator I'm glad that you stopped into my house is suffering and decided to select the color of blue dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Trudi Perkins
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Beautifully written Ricky, I really enjoyed this poem. You are very descriptive in describing the blues.I pray someday the blues will go away for you and me too.Great job and thanks for sharing your craft with us.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Trudy it's not a matter of someday that Blues going away because we all have to experience in some form each day it's a matter of how well we can handle it Channel it and then turn into not something so horribly blue but something this bright and blue as a beautiful bird or butterfly that we see in the sky talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Blue, azure, cerulean...the color blue has many shades as well as many meanings, 'tis true, Dr. Ricky.
I think you've managed to hit on quite a few of them in your delightful contemporary piece of poetry.
Well done, keep those "blue" waters flowing.
~Dean

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    The only one I'm going to add to this that I thought of later Dean is the color blue when it comes to jewelry especially turquoise and silver jewelry that is well known for being an Indian ancestry and of course the beautiful blue topaz talk to Ricky 10:24 and thanks again for visiting my House of Blues
reply by Dean Kuch on 23-Jan-2018
    My pleasure, Ricky, nice work.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
    Always a pleasure.
    Dr Ricky 1024.