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Viewing comments for Chapter 446 "The Wind Sings the Bugle Song"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from RGstar
Beautiful my friend, beautiful. That stanza is in itself worth a sixth star, yet humble are pickings.
Always good to read from you, my friend.
Good to see you well.
Have a great day.
RG
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Beautiful my friend, beautiful. That stanza is in itself worth a sixth star, yet humble are pickings.
Always good to read from you, my friend.
Good to see you well.
Have a great day.
RG
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you RG. Always good to hear from you too.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think you managed to achieve the rolling verse you were looking for.
This flows very nicely and paints a good picture of reverence and tribute.
Well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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I think you managed to achieve the rolling verse you were looking for.
This flows very nicely and paints a good picture of reverence and tribute.
Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you Sharon.
Comment from Joan E.
I am glad the flowing flags, captured in your recent photograph, took hold of your muse and propelled you to create a rolling meter. I admired your personifying the wind and your alliteration of "f's" as well. The poetic devices underscore your "rev'rence". Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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I am glad the flowing flags, captured in your recent photograph, took hold of your muse and propelled you to create a rolling meter. I admired your personifying the wind and your alliteration of "f's" as well. The poetic devices underscore your "rev'rence". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thank you Joan. I am pleased you noted those devices.
Comment from sunnilicious
The photograph was a nice accompaniment, however, completely not necessary. The poem is visual through words. Creative. Patriotic. Sad, but great tip for what to think about during silent meditations. Nice work :)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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The photograph was a nice accompaniment, however, completely not necessary. The poem is visual through words. Creative. Patriotic. Sad, but great tip for what to think about during silent meditations. Nice work :)
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much Alicia. I am pleased to hear the words were so nicely visual too. I really appreciate thiose 6 stars too.
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Trieschel,
what a wonderful poem. When I hear this being played it brings chills to my bones and sadness for all those who have fallen In todays troubled world it makes it even more poignant. I love the art work.
Brenda:))x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Hi Trieschel,
what a wonderful poem. When I hear this being played it brings chills to my bones and sadness for all those who have fallen In todays troubled world it makes it even more poignant. I love the art work.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thank you Brenda, Your point about today's troubled world is well taken.
Comment from James H. Oldfield
It's a great photo, and extra well done for that.
A lovely, thoughtful and profound poem, great job.
I can't think of anything that needs tweaking, really well done.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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It's a great photo, and extra well done for that.
A lovely, thoughtful and profound poem, great job.
I can't think of anything that needs tweaking, really well done.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thank you James, I appreciate your time and comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem inspired by the sun, moon, and the flags flowing in the wind that sounds like a bugles' song. An interesting format with three syllables per foot.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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A very well-written poem inspired by the sun, moon, and the flags flowing in the wind that sounds like a bugles' song. An interesting format with three syllables per foot.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thank you Sandra. Yes, a meter not often used, but nicely effective.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes, the song brings sadness doesn't it, because it is always played at military funerals, your write is musical, and I wish you luck with it, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Yes, the song brings sadness doesn't it, because it is always played at military funerals, your write is musical, and I wish you luck with it, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thank you Dolly. I am happy you felt it musical.
Comment from Carolyn Shelton
Nice picture.
A well written poem to go with the picture.
Well done.
Very good writing in dealing with a sensitive subject.
I can hear the bugles playing in my mind.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Nice picture.
A well written poem to go with the picture.
Well done.
Very good writing in dealing with a sensitive subject.
I can hear the bugles playing in my mind.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thank you Carolyn. I am pleased that you hear them.
Comment from Pantygynt
An interesting use of amphibrach metre. Apart from the occasional substitution in anapaest one rarely comes across this one and that Seuss poem is the one most frequently paraded as an example. Highly suitable here. You have captured the idea of the sunset call well,
Do you want to give me a date for your joining us in class yet?
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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An interesting use of amphibrach metre. Apart from the occasional substitution in anapaest one rarely comes across this one and that Seuss poem is the one most frequently paraded as an example. Highly suitable here. You have captured the idea of the sunset call well,
Do you want to give me a date for your joining us in class yet?
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thank you Pantygynt. How about Feb 9?
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9th Feb it is then
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Please send me an email to
Jambar1941.jb@gmail.com
So I can send you details of the software you will need for our meeting. Are you working off a PC or a Mac?
