Cruel words...
Grace, the unconditional willingness to forgive.79 total reviews
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, another outstanding example of this prolific writer's creative gift and deep spiritual faith - beautifully rendered in its clear message and fluid rhythm and easy rhyme...
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In my opinion, another outstanding example of this prolific writer's creative gift and deep spiritual faith - beautifully rendered in its clear message and fluid rhythm and easy rhyme...
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much Eve, for these fine comments and great review, blessings, Roy
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You are very welcome, Roy, my pleasure...Eve
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautiful piece of poetry dear Roy! I really enjoyed your poem and I agree wholeheartedly.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
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This is a beautiful piece of poetry dear Roy! I really enjoyed your poem and I agree wholeheartedly.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much Dear Rebekka for these great comments and outsding review, and specky stars, blessings, Roy
Comment from Scanless
A very thoughtful and compassionate poem. What I like most about the technical aspects is the meter. It flows smoothly, line to line.
Well done.
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A very thoughtful and compassionate poem. What I like most about the technical aspects is the meter. It flows smoothly, line to line.
Well done.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for these fine comments and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from scongrove
This is perfect for me today my dear friend! You said it well. Fantastic message. I just wish people would take your advice.
I know for me, as I get older, I have learned to grow thick skin, but words still hurt. It can carry with it a lot of damage even though you find a way to move on.
I know for me, if I don't have something pleasant to say... I just don't say anything. Not everyone takes harsh words the same as others. It can be crushing to some while others brush it away. Thank you for sharing. Your words make the difference.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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This is perfect for me today my dear friend! You said it well. Fantastic message. I just wish people would take your advice.
I know for me, as I get older, I have learned to grow thick skin, but words still hurt. It can carry with it a lot of damage even though you find a way to move on.
I know for me, if I don't have something pleasant to say... I just don't say anything. Not everyone takes harsh words the same as others. It can be crushing to some while others brush it away. Thank you for sharing. Your words make the difference.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
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You're so right dear friend, I was born with a very vulnerable nature, and had to rein it in, as a boy, we weren't supposed to be "little girls", I was a good sportsman which caused me to hide more. But I know what you mean, my writing gives me release from all that "maleness". We all wear protective masks I'm afraid, thank you for sharing Shana, well dine, blessings, Roy
Comment from Bichon
Beautifully written poem as always Roy. It is very true though, words can hurt so much, even though people say they don't. Great job with this one my friend.
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Beautifully written poem as always Roy. It is very true though, words can hurt so much, even though people say they don't. Great job with this one my friend.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much Chloe, for these fine comments and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Marianne C.
Nice form poem! I loved the word choices of "vexation's tart as well as the imagery of the words "grace walks beyond". I got hung up on the art/graphics introducing the poem. This poem can stand on its own--no need for a poster-type intro.
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Nice form poem! I loved the word choices of "vexation's tart as well as the imagery of the words "grace walks beyond". I got hung up on the art/graphics introducing the poem. This poem can stand on its own--no need for a poster-type intro.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks for this fine review, blesings, Roy
Comment from Jacques Wolfguard
I really liked how you used the descriptions to really build the momentum of the piece. It really expresses the power that we as writer's have to either create or destroy, build a social conscious or disintegrate that conscious. We can define truth, or embellish falsehoods.
The only suggestion that I have is if possible, muting the rhyming scheme a little bit more, so that it doesn't distract from the important points this poem and its character make. Besides that though great job. This is great work.
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I really liked how you used the descriptions to really build the momentum of the piece. It really expresses the power that we as writer's have to either create or destroy, build a social conscious or disintegrate that conscious. We can define truth, or embellish falsehoods.
The only suggestion that I have is if possible, muting the rhyming scheme a little bit more, so that it doesn't distract from the important points this poem and its character make. Besides that though great job. This is great work.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much Jacques, for these fine comments and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from mvbrooks
What a beautiful sentiment and such beautiful words. The words I will take away and have echo in my thoughts are "speak verbal silk" as that is the secret to overcoming cruel words.
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What a beautiful sentiment and such beautiful words. The words I will take away and have echo in my thoughts are "speak verbal silk" as that is the secret to overcoming cruel words.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for these fine comments and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from krys123
Cheers. Roy;
-that is something I more and more each day own up to. That is about if I make a comment, or wrote a statement that I thought might've been too intrusive I'll do own up to it, and tell the person I was sorry if I offended them.
-Your poem is filled with fire and brimstone philosophy that one should beware of making ill will of others.
-Oh by the way, in your fourth verse, first-line, at the end of the word TEND you have a period after the word tend instead of a comma.
-Your conceptual theme is so universal, that I could mention many situations and many different types of people who've engaged in using inappropriate words to damage or create ill will others.
-Wonderfully written, Roy, and take care and have a good one especially with all those that love you dearly.
Alex
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Cheers. Roy;
-that is something I more and more each day own up to. That is about if I make a comment, or wrote a statement that I thought might've been too intrusive I'll do own up to it, and tell the person I was sorry if I offended them.
-Your poem is filled with fire and brimstone philosophy that one should beware of making ill will of others.
-Oh by the way, in your fourth verse, first-line, at the end of the word TEND you have a period after the word tend instead of a comma.
-Your conceptual theme is so universal, that I could mention many situations and many different types of people who've engaged in using inappropriate words to damage or create ill will others.
-Wonderfully written, Roy, and take care and have a good one especially with all those that love you dearly.
Alex
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks bro. These words and observations are much appreciated, and thanks for these fine comments, blessings, Roy
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Welcome Roy.
Alex
Comment from MaryAnnie
sometimes, i read a poem and wish i could have thought of something so beautiful, so tender. sometimes, i read a work and want to paste it on my coffee cup so i see it first thing every morning. rarely, i am compelled to consume verses over and over because i need them to seep in....to penetrate deep layers.
that's how i know when to rate something six stars.
the entire poem is well crafted, but I find the first stanza to be artistic
and verbally interesting. i like how striking the word TART is, when you are talking about grace, and the contrast of verbal silk to goads in lace.
thank you for sharing such a beautiful gift.
maryannie
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sometimes, i read a poem and wish i could have thought of something so beautiful, so tender. sometimes, i read a work and want to paste it on my coffee cup so i see it first thing every morning. rarely, i am compelled to consume verses over and over because i need them to seep in....to penetrate deep layers.
that's how i know when to rate something six stars.
the entire poem is well crafted, but I find the first stanza to be artistic
and verbally interesting. i like how striking the word TART is, when you are talking about grace, and the contrast of verbal silk to goads in lace.
thank you for sharing such a beautiful gift.
maryannie
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
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Thanks MaryAnne, for these most encouraging words and inspiring thoughts along with the shiny stars, my gratitude, blessings, Roy
