The Book of Fine Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "It Now Lies Naked As The Soul"A Collection of My best works.
10 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
"There's Angels here and now the pains of past are just so vain...
"No more worries for they're that all gone."
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"For I am Reborn...
"Resurrected and complete...
"Yes, completely protected." An amazing moving write well done Ricky this is as always so moving love and regards Meia x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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"There's Angels here and now the pains of past are just so vain...
"No more worries for they're that all gone."
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"For I am Reborn...
"Resurrected and complete...
"Yes, completely protected." An amazing moving write well done Ricky this is as always so moving love and regards Meia x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Thanks so very much may you for your very kind words for this beautiful and well written piece at Sunny the 4th time I've written one with Jason doing all the writing from Heaven dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning again, Ricky: I love the colors and the photo that you chose for this one. I like the rhyme scheme and thoughts. It is a story that i could relate to and it still pains me also so I understand your need to get it all out in your poetry so nicely done...
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Good morning again, Ricky: I love the colors and the photo that you chose for this one. I like the rhyme scheme and thoughts. It is a story that i could relate to and it still pains me also so I understand your need to get it all out in your poetry so nicely done...
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Thanks again Misty air King I had a negative review on this from Dean coach basically stating that he seems to be tired of reviewing my misery on the site here but he didn't understand that I also promote organ tissue donation and it's not all about that then he message me back and said okay thanks for your time again dr. Ricky 10:24 and have a blessed day
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Yes, I understand this totally. Some people don't like it when we post our grief poetry. They seem to get impatient when I continuously post the poetry about loss. It is insensitive of them because we can write about what ever we want to write about. There is always someone who will read it. This is why I wrote that poem "Today."
Comment from Dean Kuch
I've said this probably fifty times or more since I began faithfully reading your poetry, Dr. Ricky, and as long as you keep insisting on dwelling on this particular topic involving your son Jason's accident and resulting death, I will more than likely say it another fifty times or more before you can find it within yourself to move on.
I personally don't see that happening any time soon, but who knows, it might?
I am deeply sorrowed by the loss of your son.
I don't know how may more times I can stomach saying that, but it's true.
Time to move on to greener pastures I think, buddy.
I'm sure Jason would thank you for it.
~Dean
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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I've said this probably fifty times or more since I began faithfully reading your poetry, Dr. Ricky, and as long as you keep insisting on dwelling on this particular topic involving your son Jason's accident and resulting death, I will more than likely say it another fifty times or more before you can find it within yourself to move on.
I personally don't see that happening any time soon, but who knows, it might?
I am deeply sorrowed by the loss of your son.
I don't know how may more times I can stomach saying that, but it's true.
Time to move on to greener pastures I think, buddy.
I'm sure Jason would thank you for it.
~Dean
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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My grief. Is long long gone my work bill is only just begun to honor my son and I have and I will continue to do it whether it's through posting his death or posting his life for posting his life and his death the fact that he's an organ tissue donor is one of the main reasons I do that for if I can save One Life by bringing that for forward on this site and spread it Forward whether it's through fan story or through Seacrest and Kelly in the morning and yes I've written them and through a representative who was a friend of mine from The Gift of Life who will go on that show in a second I will do it
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Okay.
Comment from chcbeck
I felt all the emotion through the poem and appreciated the change from intense dark to hope at the end. The shift in focus from what was lost to gaining the reassurance of being with God.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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I felt all the emotion through the poem and appreciated the change from intense dark to hope at the end. The shift in focus from what was lost to gaining the reassurance of being with God.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from jppoet
Firstly dear Ricky, please accept my sympathy on the loss of your son. I can personally relate to it. This poem imparts all the sadness
and tragedy that this loss has inflicted on you. I am sure Jason
has read it too. God Bless You Both. john
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Firstly dear Ricky, please accept my sympathy on the loss of your son. I can personally relate to it. This poem imparts all the sadness
and tragedy that this loss has inflicted on you. I am sure Jason
has read it too. God Bless You Both. john
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks IP power and I always say the same thing he sees all knows all but wants to be of course now here below talk to Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks confidently a thought, dead son is reborn and finally home now, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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This poem speaks confidently a thought, dead son is reborn and finally home now, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Ricky,
I like the way you have written from the perspective of your long lost son.
I seem to get the impression that you have come to terms with your loss. Nothing can ever take away the grief one feels at such a loss but you are now showing signs that you have accepted your loss and can write about it.
I really liked this.
Brenda:))x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Hi Ricky,
I like the way you have written from the perspective of your long lost son.
I seem to get the impression that you have come to terms with your loss. Nothing can ever take away the grief one feels at such a loss but you are now showing signs that you have accepted your loss and can write about it.
I really liked this.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks Brenda.
Time is surely and truely....
"The Great Healer."
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Carolyn Shelton
What a heartfelt poem!
Written in such a creative and heart tugging way.
Thank you for sharing such a personal part of yourself.
That is what makes the best writing, when we write from the depths of our soul and you have definitely done that!
My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family. May you feel God's peace!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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What a heartfelt poem!
Written in such a creative and heart tugging way.
Thank you for sharing such a personal part of yourself.
That is what makes the best writing, when we write from the depths of our soul and you have definitely done that!
My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family. May you feel God's peace!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks My Dear Carolyn.
Just finishing up my wife Caroline passed away November 26th almost 8 months after my son was killed in a car accident we donate his organs on March 31st organs to a knitted April Fool's Day on 1st April 2003 she stopped her medication apparent suicide attempt which worked I brought her back from the first heart attack but the second one 20 minutes later took her to the Grave she now rest in her box next to her and my son's box to feed on a shelf in my youngest daughter Dana's house in Mystic Islands New Jersey
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I am so very sorry about your wife!! I pray that you and your family can keep healing. Keep writing, I have found that to be great therapy!
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Ricky. Telling this from the perspective of your lost son is clever and makes the story more poignant. I was saddened by the read but feel you are happier these days than most. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Hi Ricky. Telling this from the perspective of your lost son is clever and makes the story more poignant. I was saddened by the read but feel you are happier these days than most. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Sherman541
Very heartfelt and I am certain very hard to write about, as well as, very helpful to write about. Sorrow is something that is so hard to overcome, but writing about it or talking about it helps us to deal with it, not necessarily get over it, but to help relieve our agony and suffering. Sherman
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Very heartfelt and I am certain very hard to write about, as well as, very helpful to write about. Sorrow is something that is so hard to overcome, but writing about it or talking about it helps us to deal with it, not necessarily get over it, but to help relieve our agony and suffering. Sherman
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks Sherman and I someday hope to repay your favor talk to Ricky 1024
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:) You are welcome and maybe one day I will take you up on that offer, I sure have had my share of sorrow and grief. From losing loved ones, cheated on to alcoholics and so much more. I hold my own for the most part by writing about my life experiences. Sherman.
