Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Omg, a monster on the loose. They come out at night. It has one that farts at my window in the midnight hours. Gross creatures. So I keep my door and windows locked. I understand and sympathize with you. Lolz.

Good work. Good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

What a horror feast...in such eerie words! Imagery is gruesome and
adds to the impact of this 5-7-5 poem! Thanks for sharing...
Best wishes, and good luck in contest!
Ronni

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. Sometimes evil seems to find a way into our home and fills the whole household with evil spirits. No one feels welcome in this circumstances.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hahahaha!
I HATE when that happens, Ine!
Ya know, if you change the letters around slightly, evil spells live, and veil.
I've always found that interesting.
Cool 5-7-5.
I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

reply by Dean Kuch on 22-Jan-2018

U 2

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

The artwork is the best
It goes well with your write
One would thing you knew what I'm going through since April 2017
and now 2018
horror had entered my home...I can't wait until it leaves.
Cookie

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

reply by misscookie on 22-Jan-2018

Your very welcome I'm starting this rainy day going to the doctor hes my last one until Feb 2 and 6
I pray I get plenty of writing done. plus reading which i know I will be be hide again once i leave the house
take care
Cookie

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

Sounds very omnious, Ine, I would not enter the house.
There must be a bad energie there. If you think about it it's realy scary.
You descibed it very well in few words,you can feel the atmosphere. Fia

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Thanks for the lovely six.

Comment from Realist101

Exceptional

Wow, Ine! Good one! I really like this and especially the last line! You've been watching the Investigation Discovery channel! ? :)

Very good work! Keep it up!

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. I have, but I reviewed Dean's poem that told me that they are reviewed the most. Thanks for the lovely six.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Newcomers should be aware of there surroundings. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yikes! I don't know what horror it was but that it "filled the house with too much evil" and "ate all newcomers" does create a frightening image. I don't write horror but I think this little poem does create a sense of horror well.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Poetry' writing prompt.
Nicely said and well done. This is a good message.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.