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Soulful Morning

Morning walk brings peace to the soul

8 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This haibun, Soulful Morning, opens the wintry world and shows us the chilly sights and signs of the season. The haiku backs that up with further inclusion of the winged geese above, send shivers of calm to us all. Nice.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
    Thanks for the read and the discussion.
Comment from Sugarray77
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What a lovely poem. I can feel the November weather as you described it. So invigorating. The Haibun was well-written and flowed smoothly. Good theme and photo. Well done.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
    Thanks for the read and the kind words.
Comment from kathleenspalding
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Very nice Haibun creates a strong mental image and peaceful mood. Haiku at the end fits the prose very well. Excellent use of artwork. Great job!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
    Thank you for the read and the kind words. Much appreciated.
reply by kathleenspalding on 22-Jan-2018
    You're welcome
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Create A Haibun' writing prompt.
Well said, well written, and this piece flows nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thank you for the read and the review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Teri7
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You have penned a very good descriptive poem for the Create a Haibun contest. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery from the art work and your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thank you for the read and the review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A creative and atmospheric write filled with nature doing its own thing. We should take a leaf out of their book and live every minute of life like the birds, bees and animals do, I loved your write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thank you for the read and the review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello!
What a lovely Haibun! You create a beautiful image in the reader's mind. Very relatable as I live in northern Michigan, and I, too, have experienced many times "soulful" mornings such as you write.

Best Wishes,
diane

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much for the read and the kind review.
Comment from James H. Oldfield
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I'm not sure why I've never encountered a haibun before, what a lovely form a poetry.

An excellent example, I liked this a lot.

The final line of your prose section, had you meant 'berries', rather than 'barriers'?

Good job, very well done.

Take care.

-James

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Thanks for the kind words and the save on berries. So much for spell check. Thanks again for the read.