A house of faith...
Unless you come as a little child...75 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"A house of faith...", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece.
Spiritually-uplifting, this was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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"A house of faith...", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece.
Spiritually-uplifting, this was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thanks Dear Duchhes,, for this amazing review and great comments, blessings, Roy
You're welcome dear Roy. You certainly deserve the amazing comments and generous review.
Best wishes and bless you,
the Duchess
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You're such a peach
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Roy, I'm a red hot peach..............................!
Love and hugs, the Duchess
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That's you Duchess, burning up
Roy, am I ever.........
Love and hugs,
the Duchess
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a fine poem about the message, spiritual lessons of need of keeping and fostering faith in God and keeping honesty for wisdom; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
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This is a fine poem about the message, spiritual lessons of need of keeping and fostering faith in God and keeping honesty for wisdom; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
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Thanks, for this super review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the image and the quote.
-Notes appreciated.
-A well penned poem, Roy, with
good rhyme, imagery, and meter,
in addition to good ideas to think about:
"A child can grasp the sweetest truth --
because the dust cannot blind youth."
-Good conclusion, as well.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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-I like the image and the quote.
-Notes appreciated.
-A well penned poem, Roy, with
good rhyme, imagery, and meter,
in addition to good ideas to think about:
"A child can grasp the sweetest truth --
because the dust cannot blind youth."
-Good conclusion, as well.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thanks Pam, for this marvellous review review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy
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You are very welcome, Roy.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Roy, I wish I had a six for you. This is just such a lovely poem and written with so much conviction that it totally won me over. I loved it. Thanks for sharing this with us. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Hi Roy, I wish I had a six for you. This is just such a lovely poem and written with so much conviction that it totally won me over. I loved it. Thanks for sharing this with us. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thanks Ulla,, for this super review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from ameen786
Outstanding! Roy my friend, what a supreme theme! Every verse is so full of meaning that touches the core; beautifully rhymed throughout with honey-like flow and yes sir, I agree, "The fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom."
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Outstanding! Roy my friend, what a supreme theme! Every verse is so full of meaning that touches the core; beautifully rhymed throughout with honey-like flow and yes sir, I agree, "The fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom."
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Your empathetic review and most brilliant comments and super stars, thank you, blessings, Roy
Comment from judiverse
Excellent thoughts about the houseb of faith. So true that a chld may sometimes get right at a truth that may elude adults. I especially like your point that "It's not with naked eyes men see, but with the soul..." Very profound. Good advice about searching the heights. Excellent rhyme and flow, as usual for you. I question the use of "man." I know, that's grammatically correct and supposed to be inclusive, but as Abigail Adams said, "remember the ladies." I leave it to you to figure it out. Using "we" is an option.
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Excellent thoughts about the houseb of faith. So true that a chld may sometimes get right at a truth that may elude adults. I especially like your point that "It's not with naked eyes men see, but with the soul..." Very profound. Good advice about searching the heights. Excellent rhyme and flow, as usual for you. I question the use of "man." I know, that's grammatically correct and supposed to be inclusive, but as Abigail Adams said, "remember the ladies." I leave it to you to figure it out. Using "we" is an option.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I'm not really one for political correctness, and have nothing to be regretful of, man has always been correct, we will start including children and even animals before long Judi, people are becoming a little precious. It's before God I stand in judgement, He knows the heart, thanks for the great review, blessings, Roy
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Hi, roy. If you try to be politically correct, that kind of ruins the smooth flow of writing, doesn't it? I've tried to go with being inclusive, but with poetry it's hard. judi
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
It's not with naked eyes men see,
but with the soul -- on bended knee.
How can the knowledge man has gleaned
be wells of wisdom groomed and preened? '
Ioved the poem and notes. It seems we share a common belief system. I am not at all surprised. Fantastic work love Meia xx
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It's not with naked eyes men see,
but with the soul -- on bended knee.
How can the knowledge man has gleaned
be wells of wisdom groomed and preened? '
Ioved the poem and notes. It seems we share a common belief system. I am not at all surprised. Fantastic work love Meia xx
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
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Thanks Meia, for this super review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from RGstar
Once again your faith takes center stage. I think i will do well to keep up with all your posts, but I must say, I enjoy seeing the variation and subject matter; intrigued as to which road you will take in terms of narrative.
Have a great day Roy.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Once again your faith takes center stage. I think i will do well to keep up with all your posts, but I must say, I enjoy seeing the variation and subject matter; intrigued as to which road you will take in terms of narrative.
Have a great day Roy.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thanks RG, for this really great review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from Brigitte Elko
My favorite poetry is faith based, sincere, and from the heart poetry. This qualifies for my bookcase. The simplicity of a child's perception is unique and should be nurtured continuously, lest faith is lost. Prayer, sincere, does not fall on deaf ears. God is listening. Thank you for sharing this in these tumultuous times. I loved reading it and will read frequently. Well written and thought provoking. Sorry that I don't have six stars.
:)Blessings,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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My favorite poetry is faith based, sincere, and from the heart poetry. This qualifies for my bookcase. The simplicity of a child's perception is unique and should be nurtured continuously, lest faith is lost. Prayer, sincere, does not fall on deaf ears. God is listening. Thank you for sharing this in these tumultuous times. I loved reading it and will read frequently. Well written and thought provoking. Sorry that I don't have six stars.
:)Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thanks Dear Brigitte, for this wonderful review and most uplifting comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from c_lucas
A wise man seeks his wisdom on with bended knees and an open mind. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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A wise man seeks his wisdom on with bended knees and an open mind. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thanks for another grestbreviewcand comments Charlie, blessings, Roy
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You're welcome, Roy. Charlie
