Comment from kleck140

Excellent

You did a great job at writing that poem.
The message is clear and everyone should
adhere to your words. Your choice of Proverbs 9:10a clearly
fits the image of your poetry. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for these fine comments and great review, blessings, Roy

reply by kleck140 on 23-Jan-2018

You are welcome.

Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

Excellent poem filled with your wisdom Roy. I love the poem and also the author's notes especially: wisdom, perception, intuition, and the greatest of all, the seeking of truth is necessary for imparting written work.

I think this is most evident in your work my friend.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Janet, your faithful support and your outstanding reviews are necessary fo my well being as a writer, thank you, for these outstanding review and stars, blessings, Roy

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

I like the idea of "birds of wisdom groomed and preened". With some folk, these birds have a habit of taking wing and migrating elsewhere leaving only the serpents of stupidity in their place. The "fortress wall on porous sand" or perhaps on Rio Grande might just be an example of such stupidity.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks Jim, for this excellent review and wise observations, blessings, Roy,

Comment from jppoet

Excellent

What more can I say than this work of art deserves all its accolades of
Fanstory? Poetically, rhytmically, it cannot be surpassed. I really owe it
6 stars but have none to spare this month. God Bless You. john

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks so much John for your outstanding support and "virtual" six, I'm grateful,, blessings, Roy

Comment from Ken the Carpenter

Exceptional

Thank you for sharing, wisdom is very high ranking within my thinking however your comments below is most important , seeking truth with an open mind is essential to know truth but we as human have one issue and have said to many, I ask what is the truth and then answer my own question, it is what you believe. That is not an open mind. This is not a negative to anything just my feelings. Your poem is beautiful and again thank you. Love all there is. :)

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Ken for these stellar comments and outstanding review and stars, blessings, Roy

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

I always enjoy curling up in my chair to read your soothing poetry, Roy :) Your messages make me feel good and I feel uplifted. I'm so glad you hang around this site. I'm addicted to your encouraging posts.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks so much Joy, for these most encouraging comments and uplifting review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I loved your poem, Roy, the first stanza brought back a memory of me as a little girl in Sunday School singing this song, I've added here. I'm sure you know it, I loved it. Your words are very wise, my friend, and I've always known you have what is necessary in writing to make a difference and to impart the knowledge you have gleaned over the years. You are a friend who shows compassion and understanding, and I treasure it. As usual, I have enjoyed your poem and your authors notes. :) Sandra xx

The Wise Man Built His House

The wise man built his house upon the rock
The wise man built his house upon the rock
The wise man built his house upon the rock
And the rain came tumbling down

Oh, the rain came down
And the floods came up
The rain came down
And the floods came up
The rain came down
And the floods came up
And the wise man's house stood firm.

The foolish man built his house upon the sand
The foolish man built his house upon the sand
The foolish man built his house upon the sand
And the rain came tumbling down

Oh, the rain came down
And the floods came up
The rain came down
And the floods came up
The rain came down
And the floods came up
And the foolish man's house went "splat!"

So, build your house on the Lord Jesus Christ
Build your house on the Lord Jesus Christ
Build your house on the Lord Jesus Christ
And the blessings will come down

Oh, the blessings come down
As your prayers go up
The blessings come down
As your prayers go up
The blessings come down
As your prayer go up
So build your house on the Lord Jesus Christ.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

I'm amazed that you remembered all those lyrics Sandra, I must confess to not knowing it, but I would've liked to, thank for your continued encouragement and marvellous, you are such s filip to me, blessings, Roy

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

Great poem and you make your message clear with great use of language Great rhyme and flow throughout. I particularly like the opening. Great work thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for these fine comments and great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Must agree with this poets notes as well as his poem. I see nothing wrong with wording or meaning. Many write from the darkness of man while others write by the light. Good one Bro.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thanks bro. For your uplifting comments and most supportive review, blessings, Roy

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Lovely photo of this flower that complements your poem very well. It is all in AABB rhyme. I can relate to your poem, especially about honesty. Good flow as well. Thanks sharing this gem.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks Ine, for this super review and wonderful comments, blessings, Roy