Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This parody of the tune to I'm a Little Teapot, High Tech Happiness, sounds right and is actually how I feel as well. I spend a horrible amount of time on this dealy and have almost abandoned the computer.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018

LOl, kindred spirits! I love my IPad. Except every time I look something up one thing leads to another and hours go by! Don't even get me started on Youtube. I can spend an entire day watching videos. I'm so glad they invented this during my lifetime. Thank you so much for taking an interest in my poems, I've looked up your work as well. I really enjoyed it, especially the Duck World poems!

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

This is a charming entry for the contest. Cute adn entertaining. Sounds like the song for sure. Fine presentation. Good rhymes. Flow could be improved with spag fixes. Suggestions:

I'm a happy Ipad(,) bright and new,
I google lots of things for you.
When my power runs out(,) I feel blue,(.)
Charge me up again, start anew!


Fun personification.

Good luck!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate it! :)

reply by rama devi on 23-Jan-2018

:-))

reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Boogienights, Ha Ha yes we all have to because we spend all our time here and we run out of charge LOL. A fun well written post Good luck Cheers Christine,

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018

Thank you so much for the great review, it's always appreciated.

Comment from doggymad

Excellent

Another great write for the contest. I rather enjoyed the idea of the iPad being blue in both senses of the word

best of luck in contest

hugs

Freda

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for taking time to read and review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the I'm a Little Teapot writing prompt.
Well done and well written. I like your version.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018

Thank you for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This is a lovely, humorous, representative poem; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this poem with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018

Thank you for your kind review.