Royal Wedding
Long engagements can mean disengagement16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This epigram, Royal Wedding, presents a brief, memorable poem which seems to reverse the story of the Princess and the Frog to project a sad, jilted 'toadess'. He seemed jumpy anyways.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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This epigram, Royal Wedding, presents a brief, memorable poem which seems to reverse the story of the Princess and the Frog to project a sad, jilted 'toadess'. He seemed jumpy anyways.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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:) Thank you.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Her heart and lips she did prof(f)er,
Prince Frog jumped at the better offer.
Very funny and ideal for the competiton it did make me laugh I hope you do well with this kindest regards and best wishes Meia xx
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Her heart and lips she did prof(f)er,
Prince Frog jumped at the better offer.
Very funny and ideal for the competiton it did make me laugh I hope you do well with this kindest regards and best wishes Meia xx
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thank you!
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BTW, proffer is correctly spelled...:)
Comment from Zue65
I enjoyed the subtle humor in this poem, and accompanying picture complements well the message of the poem. There are no grammar and spelling issues as well. Thanks for sharing this excellent write. God bless.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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I enjoyed the subtle humor in this poem, and accompanying picture complements well the message of the poem. There are no grammar and spelling issues as well. Thanks for sharing this excellent write. God bless.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Is there no justice, no loyalty left in the world today, Anonymous Poet?
Heavens to Murgatroyd, is nothing sacred anymore?
What if the frog croaks before the nuptials? Won't he feel like a complete horny toad and a heel for having done to the toadess what he did?
Oh, woe are we as a society...
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Is there no justice, no loyalty left in the world today, Anonymous Poet?
Heavens to Murgatroyd, is nothing sacred anymore?
What if the frog croaks before the nuptials? Won't he feel like a complete horny toad and a heel for having done to the toadess what he did?
Oh, woe are we as a society...
Comment Written 21-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thanks.
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhkay...
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Very cute and sweet... Straight to the point. Artwork goes good with the poem. I guess a better offer is sometimes hard to resist,. Thank you for sharing your work. Well done, my friend.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Very cute and sweet... Straight to the point. Artwork goes good with the poem. I guess a better offer is sometimes hard to resist,. Thank you for sharing your work. Well done, my friend.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is an Epigram Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly fine.
Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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This is an Epigram Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly fine.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2018
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Thank you.
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You're welcome
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi - this is very good in two rhyming couplets. It is a good epigram. I thought the sentence above your title made rather a good epigram also 'Long engagements can mean disengagement'. Good Luck - warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Hi - this is very good in two rhyming couplets. It is a good epigram. I thought the sentence above your title made rather a good epigram also 'Long engagements can mean disengagement'. Good Luck - warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from Rasmine
LOL! I'm wondering if I know who this is. But who knows, right? I hope you have the best of luck in the contest -- go get ém!
I like your rhyming. :D
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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LOL! I'm wondering if I know who this is. But who knows, right? I hope you have the best of luck in the contest -- go get ém!
I like your rhyming. :D
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Epigram about the princess and the frog. The frog knows his only chance to return to a Prince is to be kissed by a beautiful princess.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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A very well-written Epigram about the princess and the frog. The frog knows his only chance to return to a Prince is to be kissed by a beautiful princess.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
That's very cute! I remember the story of the Princess and the Frog prince, although there's a version where the frog is a princess. Poor Toadess, too slow, I guess.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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That's very cute! I remember the story of the Princess and the Frog prince, although there's a version where the frog is a princess. Poor Toadess, too slow, I guess.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Thank you!
