Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This naani, Sky Watcher, with four lines and twenty-five syllables, captures a sense of brilliance as the autumn moon hits the viewer as it must have ancient man. Its beaconopens our souls to possibilities. Nice.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thank you, Bill Schott, for your kind comments and feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from zanya

Exceptional

Yes the mystique and sheer beauty of the moon evoked here with joy and delight - line one has a nice touch of indecision as to what time of year is best for this lunar spectacle -and a simile to sign off

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Thank you, zanya, for your exceptional rating of my poem, the kind comments, and the feedback. I appreciate it so much. I love nature because it surrounded me as I grew up in rural Pennsylvania.

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Your simile is an apt one as there is something mystical about that full, honey-coloured moon rising in the autumn sky.

Your naani is both rhythmical and rhyming - not a requirement - but it makes for a pleasant read.

Steve

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Thank you, kiwisteveh, for your kind comments and feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Naani poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Thank you, Teri7, for your kind comments and feedback. God bless you too!