Autumn Picture Show
5-7-5 contest entry62 total reviews
Comment from RodG
You have captured the scene in the painting very well. I like your use of movie terms to describe what's being seen. Also the continuation of the scene through the poem (enjambment) emulates a movie. Congrats on your your fine finish in the contest. You got my vote. Rod
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You have captured the scene in the painting very well. I like your use of movie terms to describe what's being seen. Also the continuation of the scene through the poem (enjambment) emulates a movie. Congrats on your your fine finish in the contest. You got my vote. Rod
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Hi RodG, thank you with all my heart for your vote...I am so glad you like it...Autumn is truly a spectacular time of the year...thank you for a wonderful review...and for your wonderful vote...love Linda xxoo
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You are very welcome. Rod
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smiling big...xxoo
Comment from Ulla
Hi Linda, I like this 5-7-5 poem very much. Yeas the colours can be so spectacular that it's like going to the cinema. Very well done and good luck in the contest. All best, Ulla xx
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Hi Linda, I like this 5-7-5 poem very much. Yeas the colours can be so spectacular that it's like going to the cinema. Very well done and good luck in the contest. All best, Ulla xx
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
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HI Ulla, thank you so much sweet girl for a great review...Autumn can truly be spectacular...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Sugarray77
What a good poem and theme you have chosen. I enjoyed reading it and like the animation a lot. A good 5-7-5 verse and great entry in the contest. Well done.
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What a good poem and theme you have chosen. I enjoyed reading it and like the animation a lot. A good 5-7-5 verse and great entry in the contest. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
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Hi Sugerray, I am so glad you like it ...thank you for a great review...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Rasmine
This is really good. I have a question which sounds like an old joke. What came first -- the poem or the picture? Just wondering if you illustrated the picture?
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This is really good. I have a question which sounds like an old joke. What came first -- the poem or the picture? Just wondering if you illustrated the picture?
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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HI Rasmine, the picture ...I do write from pictures now and then...I am so glad you like it...thank you for a great review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Stunning write my friend. Our Autumn or Fall turned into snowy winter very quickly this year. A superb write as I always expect from you beautiful imagery and presentation kind regards and love Meia xx
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Stunning write my friend. Our Autumn or Fall turned into snowy winter very quickly this year. A superb write as I always expect from you beautiful imagery and presentation kind regards and love Meia xx
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
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HI Meia, thank you for a wonderful review sweet angel...Autumn truly is a beautiful season...thank you girl...love you much...Linda xxoo take care
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is perfect, Linda. Your words are perfect, your syllable count is perfect, and that picture is perfect!! What a fabulous 5-7-5 contest entry, my friend, you can't go wrong with this one. I love it! The Autumn is a favourite time for me, I love to walk through the woods and see all the lovely autumnal colours, as you say, a cinema of autumn!! Good luck in the contest, it's fabulous! Lot's of love, dear friend. Hugs to to you and your mother. xx Sandra xxxx
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That is perfect, Linda. Your words are perfect, your syllable count is perfect, and that picture is perfect!! What a fabulous 5-7-5 contest entry, my friend, you can't go wrong with this one. I love it! The Autumn is a favourite time for me, I love to walk through the woods and see all the lovely autumnal colours, as you say, a cinema of autumn!! Good luck in the contest, it's fabulous! Lot's of love, dear friend. Hugs to to you and your mother. xx Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
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Hi Sandra, thank you for a wonderful review sweet angel...I had written ...Cinerama...one to many syllables...but on paper I had written...cinema...perfect syllables...and I liked cinema...so one of the fans told me about the syllables...I didn't know if I could change it in midstream in a contest...so thank you very much for the help...Cedar(Bill) helped me as well...I came in second...one vote out from first...I can live with that...LOL...I so love the colors of Autumn...thank you my so special friend...mom is doing better...but I know she is missing my dad...sigh...love you so many lots...Hi to Ian...Linda xxoo
Comment from dragonpoet
The falling leaves in the artwork show your cinema in the poem. The beauty of the leaves is amazing. It is also great to hear the crackle of the leaves when you step on them.
Hope you do well in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
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The falling leaves in the artwork show your cinema in the poem. The beauty of the leaves is amazing. It is also great to hear the crackle of the leaves when you step on them.
Hope you do well in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
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Hi Joan, thank you so very much my sweet friend for a great review...I came in second...one vote out of first...I love the colors of Autumn...thank you...love Linda xxoo
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Congrats. Ooh so close. You're welcome. I love the colors and sounds of autumn.
Joan
Comment from Boogienights
It is amazing isnt it? My favorite tine of year with its lovely colors, crisp cool air..halloween! I really like this poem and the image you paired it with. Thanks for sharing.
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It is amazing isnt it? My favorite tine of year with its lovely colors, crisp cool air..halloween! I really like this poem and the image you paired it with. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
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HI Boogienights, I love the season as well...it starts off the holiday season...LOL...thank you for a wonderful review...so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello L. Raven,
It's a lovely piece of poetry meeting the required norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Impressive wording.
"...a cinema of Autumn..."
Picture enhances beauty and depth of the poem.
It deserves to be honored with SIX STARS which fortunately I have at present.
Best of Luck!
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Hello L. Raven,
It's a lovely piece of poetry meeting the required norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Impressive wording.
"...a cinema of Autumn..."
Picture enhances beauty and depth of the poem.
It deserves to be honored with SIX STARS which fortunately I have at present.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
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HI RP, LOL...if you didn't have a six...I would honored just the have your review...I love them because I know they are true...I love the colors of Autumn...thank you RP for all your so beautiful stars...and your wonderful review...smiling big my sweet friend...it came in second...one vote out of first...I can live with that...love Linda xxoo
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Hi L. Raven, Most Welcome! So far as your writing talent is concerned, you are in full form now.
Keep it up, and have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
Comment from Mame
This us sooo good if I were you I would certainly frame it. Super choice of words such as 'cinema' underlined by the almost picture like show. Good work!
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This us sooo good if I were you I would certainly frame it. Super choice of words such as 'cinema' underlined by the almost picture like show. Good work!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
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HI Brenda, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...
