Autumn Picture Show
5-7-5 contest entry62 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
I really like this dear fiend. I just love the fact the links or main ideas bind well; Cinema and cenema...then the curtain closes with "last leaf falls"
Very well thought of...should be battling for the win.
Good luck.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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I really like this dear fiend. I just love the fact the links or main ideas bind well; Cinema and cenema...then the curtain closes with "last leaf falls"
Very well thought of...should be battling for the win.
Good luck.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Hi Roy, so good to see you my sweet friend...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and best wishes as well to you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from c_lucas
For Autumn, the earth is its palette. Autumn is thought of as the dead season. The harvest is gathered and the remains are left to replenish the earth.
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For Autumn, the earth is its palette. Autumn is thought of as the dead season. The harvest is gathered and the remains are left to replenish the earth.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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HI Charlie, it may be dead season...but it's colors light up the world...such beauty...thank you for a great review you...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from Shawlyn
Hi I.raven,
For such a small poem, it certainly packs a punch. The 5-7-5 format is perfect for this. The picture adds to every word and the last line especially "as the last leaf falls". Well done. Regards Shawlyn
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Hi I.raven,
For such a small poem, it certainly packs a punch. The 5-7-5 format is perfect for this. The picture adds to every word and the last line especially "as the last leaf falls". Well done. Regards Shawlyn
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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HI Shawlyn, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it... love Linda xxoo
Comment from jenintorre
What a lovely 5-7-5 poem and a really nice peice of artwork that matches perfectly. So much said in just 17 syllables. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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What a lovely 5-7-5 poem and a really nice peice of artwork that matches perfectly. So much said in just 17 syllables. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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HI Jen, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a 5-7-5 Writing Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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This is a 5-7-5 Writing Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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HI Ricky, so good to see you my sweet friend...thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Linda, this is a lovely 5/7/5 with such a perfect picture. Written in correct form, lines two and three interconnecting and line three is like a satori. I love the picture with that last leaf drifting to the ground. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
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Hi Linda, this is a lovely 5/7/5 with such a perfect picture. Written in correct form, lines two and three interconnecting and line three is like a satori. I love the picture with that last leaf drifting to the ground. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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HI Dorothy, thank you so much my friend for a great review...I love the picture as well...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Cycler
Beautiful picture and words. I love this 5-7-5. Especially like the way you end it with "fall" - another word for autumn - and the double meaning as your picture shows the leaves falling. Great work of art (the picture and your words)!
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Beautiful picture and words. I love this 5-7-5. Especially like the way you end it with "fall" - another word for autumn - and the double meaning as your picture shows the leaves falling. Great work of art (the picture and your words)!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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HI Dave, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review always...love them...soooooo glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Zue65
I love the picture for it complements well the message you wanted to convey to the readers in three short lines. You followed strictly the requirements of the contest. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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I love the picture for it complements well the message you wanted to convey to the readers in three short lines. You followed strictly the requirements of the contest. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
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HI Susan, thank you my sweet friend for a great review...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
Comment from ScarletAfflictions
Oh this was nicely done! I really enjoyed the visual aspect of your writing. So well done it truly didn't need the gif of a leaf falling. It was imagined without out. Very nicely done!
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Oh this was nicely done! I really enjoyed the visual aspect of your writing. So well done it truly didn't need the gif of a leaf falling. It was imagined without out. Very nicely done!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
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HI Scarlet, thank you so much for a wonderful review...and your kind words...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from moonsunrise
I love the imagery you chose with a family feasting upon the kaleidoscope of color that Fall offers. The last leave falling is a nice touch to the end of your poem. I can almost smell the crisp leaves falling as I feel the leaves beneath my feet.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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I love the imagery you chose with a family feasting upon the kaleidoscope of color that Fall offers. The last leave falling is a nice touch to the end of your poem. I can almost smell the crisp leaves falling as I feel the leaves beneath my feet.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
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Hi Moonsunrise, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for the good luck...love LInda xxoo
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You are very welcome
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smiling back at ya...xxoo love
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