Portrait of jealousy.
No one is exempt or out of her reach.9 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello mystery poet. Jealousy. Is there any nastier or meaner thing on the planet than this emotion? Your words are descriptive and had the needed impact. Good luck and well done. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Hello mystery poet. Jealousy. Is there any nastier or meaner thing on the planet than this emotion? Your words are descriptive and had the needed impact. Good luck and well done. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Joan E.
This post must be for a blind contest, since I missed it. Your artwork selection conjured the green-eyed monster for me. I relished your use of rhymes and rhythm to enhance our understanding of the emotion. Your "creases of low self-esteem" is just one example of the splendid imagery in this poem. Brava and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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This post must be for a blind contest, since I missed it. Your artwork selection conjured the green-eyed monster for me. I relished your use of rhymes and rhythm to enhance our understanding of the emotion. Your "creases of low self-esteem" is just one example of the splendid imagery in this poem. Brava and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the great review, Joan. And of course the bonus star
Comment from Boogienights
Who hasn't felt this way one time or another? This poem expresses the feeling of jealousy very well, you paired it with a great image and I loved the way you formatted it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Who hasn't felt this way one time or another? This poem expresses the feeling of jealousy very well, you paired it with a great image and I loved the way you formatted it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Trudi Perkins
Well written and so true. I had one occasion when I was jealous. I dropped him like a hot potato and now I've been with someone that respects our relationship and I've never felt that horrible feeling again. Good job. I liked this one.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Well written and so true. I had one occasion when I was jealous. I dropped him like a hot potato and now I've been with someone that respects our relationship and I've never felt that horrible feeling again. Good job. I liked this one.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
A very cleverly constructed offering. I find not only the personification of Jealousy to be intriguing but its female embodiment as well. What I particularly appreciate about your emotion poem is that it is not at all stilted with the formatting of "Jealousy looks like" etc. Your take is original.
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Hello!
A very cleverly constructed offering. I find not only the personification of Jealousy to be intriguing but its female embodiment as well. What I particularly appreciate about your emotion poem is that it is not at all stilted with the formatting of "Jealousy looks like" etc. Your take is original.
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review and noting the formatting.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written emotion poem about jealousy. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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This is a very well written emotion poem about jealousy. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Write An Emotion Poem' writing prompt.
Well written, a clear message with emotion.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Write An Emotion Poem' writing prompt.
Well written, a clear message with emotion.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Jealousy knows no person, jealousy is illusive, beware of visiting her; none is beyond her grip, well said, well done the emotion in expression, good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Jealousy knows no person, jealousy is illusive, beware of visiting her; none is beyond her grip, well said, well done the emotion in expression, good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ricky1024
Emotional contest home entry based on the word jealousy and how cruel it could be is a whip that Sting the vacuum turns the back into a bloody River of pain I like this rich and seem as well as energy flows well read well no grammar issues as well. Jack an object the contents were both firmly in place an excellent trip to measure slime perfectly good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Emotional contest home entry based on the word jealousy and how cruel it could be is a whip that Sting the vacuum turns the back into a bloody River of pain I like this rich and seem as well as energy flows well read well no grammar issues as well. Jack an object the contents were both firmly in place an excellent trip to measure slime perfectly good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the great review.
