Comment from Roxanne56

Excellent

Love this delicious and humorous written recipe. "Bat wings and snout", what's is that all about, made me laugh throughout the whole reading. Very nicely done.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Just an ex thing my ex Nancy was Italian she has a big nose in the calculator last so I was calling her which so sort of like what a witch would be putting in her pot of stew talk to Ricky 224 thanks for this

Comment from Badger_29

Exceptional

Absolutely packed with humor. I love your sugar and spice and puppy dog tails and all the elements would you put into this, concepts which we all can identify with. This seem to have elements of good union, and of the union which is most commonly seen today, basically sex just for the sake of sex.
So you have encapsulated all these concepts in a way which was very enjoyable to read, including the Pillsbury Doughboy .

Blessings,

Brother Badger

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

This was based on a piece I wrote a few years earlier called the god cake different but similar in a way thanks for your time and review dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I always think it shows great ingenuity to create a new word, Doctor Ricky. Exrightment is a good one, and it says a lot before one even reads the poem's contents.

Have a great day!

Gloria

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

This was great--so off the wall and unexpected. Hilarious is a word that comes to mind. Alice in Wonderland is a story that comes to mind. This is so well constructed, using so much imagination. I loved the entire piece!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

And thanks for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Now this one was off the wall of what I am used to but it still had your flair and form. Nicely done in describing and be sure you get the couple right.lol

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018

I thanks Barbara do you know I love you forever dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Thoughts somewhat funny, fantastic, the making or preparation of Love Cake at the stuff of frustration and dissatisfaction of life; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018

Thanks Creator and have a slice.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today