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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a simple poem with great presence and effectiveness and makes my heart flutter with desire, I wish you luck with it, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Thank you
Comment from Dan Diego
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I really like this poem. The title peaked my interest. Then the photo set the tone for the poem. And you delivered eight little lines of conditional verse (if ... then) that told me how you really feel about a relationship. It made me wonder if the targeted person met the conditions. Great job.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Thank you. ( I am not in any relationship )