Silly You!
20 syllables, you can count.6 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
Hey you, I'm one who counted to 20, silly me for checking you, I am who
I am 'cause you are you, that makes 4 of silly who's, not counting all
those other all you's...LOL
Loved your poem, and witty presentation.
Now if you're counting stars, you have to figure out which ones
are all for you or why you should claim all of them....LOL..
Best of luck in contest.... Ronni
If you are all the you...you are...you can keep all the stars...LOL
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Hey you, I'm one who counted to 20, silly me for checking you, I am who
I am 'cause you are you, that makes 4 of silly who's, not counting all
those other all you's...LOL
Loved your poem, and witty presentation.
Now if you're counting stars, you have to figure out which ones
are all for you or why you should claim all of them....LOL..
Best of luck in contest.... Ronni
If you are all the you...you are...you can keep all the stars...LOL
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Ronni you is a funny you, lol.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a good poem asks and tells our identities altogether in a you approach and attitude, well said and well done; thanks for sharing this with us. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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This is a good poem asks and tells our identities altogether in a you approach and attitude, well said and well done; thanks for sharing this with us. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks very much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun poem but just trying to figure out who you is? Just kidding, a great play on words and I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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This is a fun poem but just trying to figure out who you is? Just kidding, a great play on words and I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018
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Thanks, Dolly!
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Short Poem Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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This is a Short Poem Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thanks, Ricky.
Comment from James H. Oldfield
I DID count, and you are indeed correct :)
Very good poem, I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck with the contest, a very difficult restriction to work with.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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I DID count, and you are indeed correct :)
Very good poem, I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck with the contest, a very difficult restriction to work with.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Short Poem' writing prompt.
This is indeed a silly poem.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Short Poem' writing prompt.
This is indeed a silly poem.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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lol thanks
