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An Emotion Poem

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good emotion poem you have penned my friend. You picked out a very good emotion to write about. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work! Great job! I enjoyed it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Glad you did. You wrote a winner.
Each line is perfect. Sorry I don't have sixes.

I love the scent of honeysuckle... roses pale in comparison. How do you know honeysuckle? Do you have a plant in your yard?

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    I have a trellis full of honeysuckle. I'd have it cover the house if I could. lol. It's my favorite scent, long before roses. Gardenia would be my next favorite. I'm so happy you enjoyed this. Thank you so much.
Comment from mermaids
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I just wrote my first emotion poem also. You did a great job here with the theme of happiness. Your descriptive words give a feel of happiness. I especially like the line "It tastes like the nectar of Olympian gods".

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Oh, I'm glad you like that line. It was my favorite. Thank you so much for a great review.
Comment from FlamingSpade
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I'm glad you gave an Emotion Poem a try since I thought it was very well done. I feel happiness through your words and totally agree with the sentiment. Happiness comes from within. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thank you. I'm so happy you agree. I appreciate this very supporting review.
Comment from Ricky1024
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And thanks for your wonderful thoughts on this subject.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thank you for giving such a wonderful review. I'm glad you like it. 8-)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like the message of this poem along with the artwork. I think that your words are very true. If you're not happy with yourself, then, how can you make someone else happy. This was well written and well done. Thanks for sharing this.

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much. A lesson we have to learn for ourselves. I'm so happy you like it.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Oh my dear lady, this is exceptional with the descriptive words you used. I love the last line of what happiness is, you are so right

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. I wasn't sure how it would be received. Thanks, again, my friend.