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Scary And Serene

an rhyming acrostic fan letter/contest entry

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Comment from Wetbelly01
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What a great poem for the Fanstorians contest!....
The acrostics is cool!... It's a neat approach!...
My compliments!... Good Luck in the contest!!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Thank you for the rave review and the good luck wishes for the contest.

    Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a great tribute to Dean and I hope he likes it, he is the king of horror writing only rivalled by the female versions of him (Meia)! Great words, loved it! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Thanks for the review. He said he liked it. I agree with you about Meia.

    Joan
Comment from smileycloud
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quite picturesque with very vivid imagery
good acrostic form and style
certainly covered some of his talents for sure
well done
have a smiley day
Lorraine

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Thanks for the kind comments and high rating

    Joan
Comment from Dean Kuch
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H-mmmmm... I seriously doubt if you're writing about Teri7, royowen, or patecelaw, Joan.
Heh-heh-heh.
Of course, I could be wrong.
I was once, you know?
It's good, I think, that you've left this up for the readers to decide who it might be you're writing of. It adds an air of mystery to the mix.
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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Glad you liked it . There is no mystery because it is an acrostic of your name.

    You sound like my husband about being right. He jokingly says. 'People quickly know that I am right or slowly realize they are wrong.' I think he heard it somewhere else and very rapidly took it as his motto.


    JOan
reply by Dean Kuch on 14-Jan-2018
    I know that, Joan. But how many of our fellow Fanstorians do you think will even realize it?
    Many here are not the most perceptive bunch.
Comment from Joan E.
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I admired your selection of the acrostic form for your salute to a FanStorian. (I think he spells his name "Kuch".) I enjoyed your use of abundant alliteration to intensify your description. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thanks for the review. I don't know what happened to the C line but I added it.
    check it out.

    Joan
reply by Joan E. on 13-Jan-2018
    Neat--you included more alliteration. Well done! -Joan
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Glad you liked the mistakenly missed line.
    Yet even more alliteration.

    Joan
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Fanstorians in Poetic Form' writing prompt.
Or it could be. I think you mean Dean Kuch. You are missing the C.
Otherwise well done.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 13-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
    Thanks for the review. Yes, I know. I was sure I had a "c" line in it when i posted It.. I may have accidentally erased it when I changed the bolding of the first letters. I re-added the line. Please check it out.

    Joan