Scary And Serene
an rhyming acrostic fan letter/contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from Wetbelly01
What a great poem for the Fanstorians contest!....
The acrostics is cool!... It's a neat approach!...
My compliments!... Good Luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
What a great poem for the Fanstorians contest!....
The acrostics is cool!... It's a neat approach!...
My compliments!... Good Luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the rave review and the good luck wishes for the contest.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a great tribute to Dean and I hope he likes it, he is the king of horror writing only rivalled by the female versions of him (Meia)! Great words, loved it! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
This is a great tribute to Dean and I hope he likes it, he is the king of horror writing only rivalled by the female versions of him (Meia)! Great words, loved it! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the review. He said he liked it. I agree with you about Meia.
Joan
Comment from smileycloud
quite picturesque with very vivid imagery
good acrostic form and style
certainly covered some of his talents for sure
well done
have a smiley day
Lorraine
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
quite picturesque with very vivid imagery
good acrostic form and style
certainly covered some of his talents for sure
well done
have a smiley day
Lorraine
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the kind comments and high rating
Joan
Comment from Dean Kuch
H-mmmmm... I seriously doubt if you're writing about Teri7, royowen, or patecelaw, Joan.
Heh-heh-heh.
Of course, I could be wrong.
I was once, you know?
It's good, I think, that you've left this up for the readers to decide who it might be you're writing of. It adds an air of mystery to the mix.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
H-mmmmm... I seriously doubt if you're writing about Teri7, royowen, or patecelaw, Joan.
Heh-heh-heh.
Of course, I could be wrong.
I was once, you know?
It's good, I think, that you've left this up for the readers to decide who it might be you're writing of. It adds an air of mystery to the mix.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Glad you liked it . There is no mystery because it is an acrostic of your name.
You sound like my husband about being right. He jokingly says. 'People quickly know that I am right or slowly realize they are wrong.' I think he heard it somewhere else and very rapidly took it as his motto.
JOan
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I know that, Joan. But how many of our fellow Fanstorians do you think will even realize it?
Many here are not the most perceptive bunch.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your selection of the acrostic form for your salute to a FanStorian. (I think he spells his name "Kuch".) I enjoyed your use of abundant alliteration to intensify your description. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
I admired your selection of the acrostic form for your salute to a FanStorian. (I think he spells his name "Kuch".) I enjoyed your use of abundant alliteration to intensify your description. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the review. I don't know what happened to the C line but I added it.
check it out.
Joan
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Neat--you included more alliteration. Well done! -Joan
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Glad you liked the mistakenly missed line.
Yet even more alliteration.
Joan
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Fanstorians in Poetic Form' writing prompt.
Or it could be. I think you mean Dean Kuch. You are missing the C.
Otherwise well done.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
I think this is a good entry for the 'Fanstorians in Poetic Form' writing prompt.
Or it could be. I think you mean Dean Kuch. You are missing the C.
Otherwise well done.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thanks for the review. Yes, I know. I was sure I had a "c" line in it when i posted It.. I may have accidentally erased it when I changed the bolding of the first letters. I re-added the line. Please check it out.
Joan