Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

It would seem that this person has a very active imagination for creatures of the night and then he/she is trying to reset to a much less scary place. One that is comforting and homey. Sometimes people can be so fickle. Great poem. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the contest. Sherman

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the 5-star rating and the good luck wishes.

dp

reply by Sherman541 on 22-Jan-2018

you are welcome. Again , Good Luck ! :)

Comment from James H. Oldfield

Excellent

Very good, very appropriate :)

I've no suggestions to make, this is excellent as it is.

Great work, and I hope he likes it :)

Take care.

-James

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thanks, James for the high rating. and the vote of confidence. He did like it.

Joan

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Very well done, and in the style of the master himself, for it could only be about him. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2018

Thank you for reviewing and the good luck wishes.

Joan

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Well said, well done, a true and dedicated appreciation of a Fanstorian is appreciable and likeable to read; thanks for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Thanks for taking the time to read and review this poem. I appreciate all the stars.


dp

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hello Poet. I would think this sounds like Dean or Boo. Both can write quite spine chilling work. I enjoyed the lovely piece of writing. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Thanks Kiwi for the nice review. You're right about their writing being spine tingling. It is Dean for it is an acrostic of his name.

Joan

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Creating calm cool lines letting
Hope hop to it in homey settings

Dear Mystery Author,

You've lost your lovin' mind. *smile* I knew who you were describing -- to a tee -- until we reached the last two lines.... hahahahahaha! Good thing you used the acrostic poetry form or you'd really have people confused!

*smile* JK! We all know that Dean is a pussycat underneath all that gloom and doom. Thanks for the smile and good luck in the voting!!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Robyn, thanks for the humorous review and all the stars. I appreciate the good luck wishes.


Joan

reply by robyn corum on 19-Jan-2018

(Careful about signing your name in a secret contest)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

Okay, I'm going to go out on a limb and .... cut down a rotting corpse so I can send it to Dean Kuch. He may like that, since it is 98% of his writing content. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thanks, Bill. I think he will like that too.

Joan

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello author
Oh you gave too many clues of who this fanstorian is ( I know and I'm not going to say who it is,
Will take away a the fun folks will have solving your fun posting
Gert

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Thanks for the review, Gert. There really is no mystery for it is a acrostic of his name.
I didn't bold the first letters to make it a little harder to tell it is an acrostic.

Joan

reply by Gert sherwood on 16-Jan-2018

You are welcome Joan
Okay its not a mystery
Smiles
Gert

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018

You are right in that.

Joan

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

A couple of little things. Why not demons plural? And I think you should hyphenate 'fear-curled'

Otherwise a nice tribute to FanStory's very own master of horror who can also turn his pen to more gentle things.

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks for the nice review and the editing help. I made the corrections.

Joan

Comment from Sam Roote

Good

Great entry! It had great flow to it. I liked the subject matter of monsters and things that frighten. The closing was fun with a narration of the author. seems like you did put a lot of thought into it. Good luck to you.

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 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks for the kind comments and good luck wishes. But if you though it was great, why only rate it good not excellent?

dragonpoet