'Twas Late in Winter
5-7-5 Irony8 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this poem. I like the flow and content. It was well written and very well done. The accompanying artwork was nicely done and spot on. Thank you for sharing this. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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I like this poem. I like the flow and content. It was well written and very well done. The accompanying artwork was nicely done and spot on. Thank you for sharing this. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
Comment from moonsunrise
What a beautiful image you selected. I really enjoyed reading your poem. What a great choice of words.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Kind regards.
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What a beautiful image you selected. I really enjoyed reading your poem. What a great choice of words.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Kind regards.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Spring is definitely full of possibilities and you are ready to shake off the snow and shed your warm clothing! Good luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
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Spring is definitely full of possibilities and you are ready to shake off the snow and shed your warm clothing! Good luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
Comment from Ricky1024
Translating winter was excellent rich and seamless Wells imagery it flowed well read well with no grammar issues I take to an object the continents were excellent and both firmly in place just rip the measures lined up perfectly thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024 and good luck in the contest
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Translating winter was excellent rich and seamless Wells imagery it flowed well read well with no grammar issues I take to an object the continents were excellent and both firmly in place just rip the measures lined up perfectly thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024 and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
Comment from Carolyn Shelton
Very nice!
Such a lovely picture and the wording in blue print stands out so nicely.
Like your ending!
Gives a happy feel to the poem!
Good Luck to you in the contest.
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Very nice!
Such a lovely picture and the wording in blue print stands out so nicely.
Like your ending!
Gives a happy feel to the poem!
Good Luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Poem' writing prompt.
A good message in your few, well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Poem' writing prompt.
A good message in your few, well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully. The line and syllable count are spot on as to be expected. The content is wonderfully executed as you deliver something more than a simple 5-7-5 as the clever and hopeful satori so clearly show. All the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully. The line and syllable count are spot on as to be expected. The content is wonderfully executed as you deliver something more than a simple 5-7-5 as the clever and hopeful satori so clearly show. All the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
Comment from Cheryl I
Nice entry for the 5-7-5 contest! It feels like spring today, but more snow is on the way. I hope March ushers in the real thing. Good job on this - Cheryl
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Nice entry for the 5-7-5 contest! It feels like spring today, but more snow is on the way. I hope March ushers in the real thing. Good job on this - Cheryl
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
