Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Congratulations on your win and well deserved in this short but "sweet" senyru. The image to accompany is stunning and the combination of your poem and image make quite an impact on the reader. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Thank you for dropping by to read and review!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This senryu, Penny Candy, has a 5-7-5 format and sweetens our experience with a nod to the candy makers out there. Jelly beans are the greatest.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2018

Childhood memories...we're all kids at heart.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Ha! Love it, great memories of penny candy. Well done. You made me smile. Beautifully written. The photograph complimented your theme. Good choice. It's a well-written Senryu. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thank you for your kind consideration.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 'Senryu You' writing prompt.
A well penned verse in a few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thank you!

Comment from zanya

Excellent

oh-h all those wonderful childhood memories of times gone by captured forever in the lines of the succinct Senryu and remembered by name !'Jelly beans and Mary Janes'.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Appreciate very much your reading and reviewing my nostalgic piece!