Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This senryu, Endless Love, has a 5-7-5 format and tells it like it is with a good relationship. Everything can't be mutual, with the exception of respect.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Well done. You made me smile with the sentiment of living without them. Beautifully written. The photograph complimented your theme. Good choice. It's a well-written Senryu. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018

Thank you for your wonderful review.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Senryu You writing prompt.
Well said in so few words. Nicely done.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thank you for your wonderful review.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image.
-Syllable count is good.
-Interesting, contrasting ideas
in your poem.
-It allows the reader to
wonder what she doesn't like about him.
-But it doesn't seem to be
enough for her to be without him.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thanks for your wonderful review.

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Jan-2018

You are welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

No one is perfect and we those little imperfections in us are what we come to accept when making a relationship work, your write says it all, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and review it.