My Playful Doggy
A child has a playful doggy.5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a witty poem about your dog and how he plays. It can be about young dogs in general. I hope you found what he took. I don't think it was poop for I don't think he would poop in his home. That is for your beautiful backyard or the park.
Cute dog.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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This is a witty poem about your dog and how he plays. It can be about young dogs in general. I hope you found what he took. I don't think it was poop for I don't think he would poop in his home. That is for your beautiful backyard or the park.
Cute dog.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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I appreciate your read and review.
Blessings,
brigitte
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My pleasure, Brigitte.
Joan
Comment from smileycloud
perfect
it is certainly a childrens poem
I know it is because I am a big kid and I love it
the rhymes are perfect
the story is great
the charactirastion of the pup is fantastic
I can even from your word imagery see the dog running away with the object and the house
have a smiley day
Lorraine
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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perfect
it is certainly a childrens poem
I know it is because I am a big kid and I love it
the rhymes are perfect
the story is great
the charactirastion of the pup is fantastic
I can even from your word imagery see the dog running away with the object and the house
have a smiley day
Lorraine
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for this praising review. You honor me. This is not my usual style but sometimes the mood has to be lightened. I so appreciate the six stars.
Have a great evening,my friend,
Brigitte :)
Comment from rhonnie69
Happy New Year Brigitte ELKO: Word has it that his dog, is a man's best friend. Assuming that that's true, I've imagined that a fire hydrant is his dog's best friend. When I'm walking my dog, he pays more attention to this one particular fire hydrant than any thing else, even me.
He goes, sniff, sniff, sniff, to get a whiff, whiff, whiff, then one rear paw lift, you get my drift. Paw hiked in the air, he doesn't seem to care, whether or not I'm there. My playful dog is a lot like yours. When he's got to go, out it pours. "AFTER: he's released his flow. He follows me where ever I go. I like your poem, Brigitte. Because I can easily relate to it. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Happy New Year Brigitte ELKO: Word has it that his dog, is a man's best friend. Assuming that that's true, I've imagined that a fire hydrant is his dog's best friend. When I'm walking my dog, he pays more attention to this one particular fire hydrant than any thing else, even me.
He goes, sniff, sniff, sniff, to get a whiff, whiff, whiff, then one rear paw lift, you get my drift. Paw hiked in the air, he doesn't seem to care, whether or not I'm there. My playful dog is a lot like yours. When he's got to go, out it pours. "AFTER: he's released his flow. He follows me where ever I go. I like your poem, Brigitte. Because I can easily relate to it. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2018
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Thank you and a Happy New Year to you. Please post your poetic words, it is worthy of a poem. I love it.
He goes sniff........adorable.
Thank you for your kindness in liking my poem. It won 3rd place in the contest!
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute Children's poem you have penned for the contest. I love the wording you used and the cute picture of the little dog. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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This is a very cute Children's poem you have penned for the contest. I love the wording you used and the cute picture of the little dog. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this nice review and the read. I plan to do nothing but review tomorrow. I am way behind in reading work from my favorite writers including you.
Have a great evening.
Brigitte
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Don't feel too bad as I am too! love you my friend!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Well said, well done, a fantastic rhyming poem about a playful doggy read; thank you for sharing this; good luck for the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Well said, well done, a fantastic rhyming poem about a playful doggy read; thank you for sharing this; good luck for the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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I so appreciate your faithful reading of my work. Your words are kind and encouraging; so, I will work to better my craft through postings.
Have a great evening,my friend.
Brigitte
