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Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Trisha;
Thank you for sharing your Stacked 5-7-5-7-7. The photo works well and the comparison between the love of the swans to that of humans works well. Except that swans mate for life, and humans not so much,

~patty~

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
    I appreciated your kind review.
    Hugs, Trishao
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is lovely, great picture and warm hearted words Trisha, swans are a joy to watch and we have them in Beacon Park in Lichfield, fascinating, loving words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
    Thanks for reviewing this post Dolly . I?m glad you enjoyed their, legant regal love photo.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is a lovely piece. Swans always evoke feelings of bonding and love so it was a good theme choice. I wonder though how much human dating ends in such lasting bonding as divorce statistics seems to indicate quite the opposite. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
    Yes , I agree. The divorce and STD rates are highest among the 60+ age groupi! Swans are mognonamous too. Thanks for reviewing
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Good morning, Trisha: This is such an awesome picture. I have seen the swans do this and I just this it is so marvelously amazing. This has go to be one of the most public acts of deep love and caring. It is so true what you are saying. We seem to consider human love above the animal's love but they are clearly able to love each other the way we love each other. Sometimes they may even be better at this. Awesome and your poem is awesome too. Have a splendid day.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
    I finally am feeling better, thanks for reviewing. WOWSER, hat a great surprise! You are very generous, because I know there are good .posts out there. Thank you so much. Yes, I agree with you , they are awesome
    Hugs and smiles ,Trisha
Comment from tfawcus
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Swans are a fine example of other living thins apart from members of the human race that are monogamous and mate for life. Humans, on the whole, are perhaps less faithful. I understand that the average length of marriages is around seven years rather than the avowed lifetime commitment.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
    Hi Tony, good morning. Thanks for your review. Yes it?s a shame. Did you know that the 60+ group have the highest divorce and STD rates !!!!!!!
    You spurned me into writing about the bad side of life. Please read the Seven Deadly Sins which I released 5 minutes ago.
    Thanks, Trisha
Comment from smileycloud
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a really lovely poem with very good form and style
The swans form the perfect love heart and your poem is a beautiful portrayal of their perfection
blessings
have a smiley day
Lorraine

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
    Thanks a bunch of smiles Lorraine.
    Have a woderful day
    Hugs, Trisha