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We're Just A Visitor

Loss of a love one

6 total reviews 
Comment from FlamingSpade
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So true. I enjoyed your post and thought for the most part it flowed and rhymed well except for the second verse. However, well put. We are just visitors passing through...none of us can stay.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018


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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a clear emphasis on shared grief. The rhyme and meter are good throughout. This speaks to the simple truth that we are only passing through for our souls were meant for bigger and better things. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018


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Comment from tfawcus
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Our time here is limited, and that's for sure! Death will come to us all and we know not the time of his coming. It sometimes seems that all is preordained, yet we were born with free will and the ability to change the course of our lives by our own endeavours. That, surely, is also part of God's purpose.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018


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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Wise words and we all know our life span is limited and yet we never learn to deal with it do we, none of us want to leave because life is so good, a great entry to this competition and this is my favourite write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2018


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    Thanks for your kind words. I really appreciate your review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Well done, well said, clear write about our status of living in this world; thank you for sharing this nice poem with us; wish you good luck. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018


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    Thanks for your kind words. I really appreciate your review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Empathy With Grief' writing prompt.
Well written, well said. A strong and clear message.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018


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    Thanks for your kind words. I really appreciate your review.