Captain Kirk and John Wayne
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Comment from Ricky1024
This doesn't work well for me. Up a country western hero with a basic Trek loving Spaceman John Wayne was a real person who didn't Explorer imaginary places where no human has gone before he play different roles and was well-respected for them all mean when the other hand James T Kirk or William Shatner had gotten his start from a roll and Twilight Zone followed by second role in Twilight Zone then he moved through out with other bit roll so we finally landed the role is James T Kirk when she was well recognized for what he does by no way or Ken walk in the shoes of John Wayne the late John Wayne by the way that was well recognized throughout his career mainly is a country western superhero wow game Steve Kerr got it started William Shatner in it and one of two twilight zones back in the early sixties and progressed with the Star Trek role which he was most recognized for 2 star review is is basically that the two of those don't work well together number one number to and sentences were running you need to learn how to properly present your work which of course is f***** a logically spot to logically logically logical which is quit enterprising dr. Ricky 1024
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This doesn't work well for me. Up a country western hero with a basic Trek loving Spaceman John Wayne was a real person who didn't Explorer imaginary places where no human has gone before he play different roles and was well-respected for them all mean when the other hand James T Kirk or William Shatner had gotten his start from a roll and Twilight Zone followed by second role in Twilight Zone then he moved through out with other bit roll so we finally landed the role is James T Kirk when she was well recognized for what he does by no way or Ken walk in the shoes of John Wayne the late John Wayne by the way that was well recognized throughout his career mainly is a country western superhero wow game Steve Kerr got it started William Shatner in it and one of two twilight zones back in the early sixties and progressed with the Star Trek role which he was most recognized for 2 star review is is basically that the two of those don't work well together number one number to and sentences were running you need to learn how to properly present your work which of course is f***** a logically spot to logically logically logical which is quit enterprising dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This is an excellent conversation entry for the contest. The characters chosen were quite opposites and communicated on a unique level. I enjoyed this story and am a huge John Wayne fan. I almost heard his voice while reading...that tells that it was excellently written. This one has my vote in the contest.
Have a great day.
Brigitte
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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This is an excellent conversation entry for the contest. The characters chosen were quite opposites and communicated on a unique level. I enjoyed this story and am a huge John Wayne fan. I almost heard his voice while reading...that tells that it was excellently written. This one has my vote in the contest.
Have a great day.
Brigitte
Comment Written 09-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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That's about as good a review as one can get! And your vote was a terrific bonus as well. Unfortunately, some unscrupulous person who wasn't in the contest, stole the idea and jumped ahead in the voting (even though I don't think the writing itself is very good). Than you for your eloquent comments, Brigette!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good submission for the 'Conversations' writing prompt.
Well done, your story is well told. I can image the characters in their roles within your story.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good submission for the 'Conversations' writing prompt.
Well done, your story is well told. I can image the characters in their roles within your story.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 08-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Thanks for your encouraging comments, Sharon.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Very well said, well done, wish you best of luck for your conversations writing prompt entry, thank you for sharing with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Very well said, well done, wish you best of luck for your conversations writing prompt entry, thank you for sharing with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2018
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Thank you Alcreator, for your complimentary comments and good wishes.
