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Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Back To School"
"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello rhonnie69
Well I can say one thing about the little girl in your poem with the Pink hair bow, finishing the final touch, and how happy she feels about herself, Has a good attitude and sounds like she is happy with out thoughts of dismay.
Like I did.
Gert

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2018

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A delightful story within your wonderful poem about going to school and the repetitious routine! Soon it will be going to work! And I know which I would rather do and it isn't work! A poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2018

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Nicely done, well expressed, off or to school, good rhymes, softly and naturally stated, thank you for sharing this with us; Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018