Comment from oliver818

Excellent

I enjoyed your haiku. I think it's a nice idea, shane we can't always do the same as humans. Thanks for sharing this poem and have yourself a really great day

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thank you, Oliver, for your complimentary comments.
here's wishing you and yours a happy, healthy 2018!

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I like this piece and it is a valuable lesson. Although the real problem with mankind is that it can't along with its own species let alone others...

Good stuff
GMG

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018

Thank you for your compliments. (As i'm sure you know, 'species' was used as a metaphor for race, religion, et al.)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A faithful write about animals at one with each other, friends rather than enemies seems to be a preferred connection with another, a poignant and clever write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2018