haiku (Florida finch)
haiku 4-4-57 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
The Florida finch must deny how cold it is to remain in such freezing, frigid temperatures, Anonymous Poet.
Denial can be a bitter, brutal thing to behold.
Good haiku, perfectly constructed.
Best wishes in the contest.
The Florida finch must deny how cold it is to remain in such freezing, frigid temperatures, Anonymous Poet.
Denial can be a bitter, brutal thing to behold.
Good haiku, perfectly constructed.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
Comment from Ricky1024
I like this well-written rich and team as well as imagery and it flowed very well with no grammar problems here ejective content was great objektiv content even better if the measures lined up perfectly and were firmly in place thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
I like this well-written rich and team as well as imagery and it flowed very well with no grammar problems here ejective content was great objektiv content even better if the measures lined up perfectly and were firmly in place thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
Comment from tfawcus
I understand that this latest cold snap reached all the way down to Florida. It becomes progressively more and more difficult for climate deniers to hold their position. I was interested in your picture of the finch. It looks very similar to the English robin.
I understand that this latest cold snap reached all the way down to Florida. It becomes progressively more and more difficult for climate deniers to hold their position. I was interested in your picture of the finch. It looks very similar to the English robin.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the haiku writing prompt.
Good message in your few words.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
I think this is a good entry for the haiku writing prompt.
Good message in your few words.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is simply great. It reminds me of Australians in the UK during the winter wearing flip flops and shorts...lol
'This isn't winter, mate. It's blooming tropical!"
All joking aside though, the imagery is clear here and the denouement of one denying the obvious has a very prescient feel.
All the best
GMG
Hi there,
This is simply great. It reminds me of Australians in the UK during the winter wearing flip flops and shorts...lol
'This isn't winter, mate. It's blooming tropical!"
All joking aside though, the imagery is clear here and the denouement of one denying the obvious has a very prescient feel.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
Comment from oliver818
What a great haiku. There's someone I'd like to see stuck to a branch. Poor little bird though. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
What a great haiku. There's someone I'd like to see stuck to a branch. Poor little bird though. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a cute write and cute picture to match. Such hardships for the little birds that speckle the landscape with their vibrant colour and touch our hearts, a beautiful haiku, love Dolly x
This is a cute write and cute picture to match. Such hardships for the little birds that speckle the landscape with their vibrant colour and touch our hearts, a beautiful haiku, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018