Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

It may show our age, but we can see. Yes, those candles are great to have in the least expecting situations. The weather can turn wicked, leaving us in the dark for hours, sometimes overnight. It pays to have them on hand. It beats stumbling in the dark. Thank you for sharing this great awareness.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022

Thanks, Carolyn, for reading and reviewing my poem. Glad you liked it.
Joan

reply by Carolyn Dooley on 28-Apr-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from mmayen

Excellent

It seems like what you have at hand is experience! It reads like a riddle. I like the seamless flow of the poem.

Of answering nature's call ( was this a hard line to pull off?)
Protects you from a stubbed toe or a fall

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022

Thanks for the nice comments and high rating.
dp

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

A candle it may be and I clearly see what it is and how it shines and gives light but so do those who dabble in the arts, such as writers of poetry, in a variety of form.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022

Tom,
Thanks for the review. Yes, light can come in many forms.
Joan

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Good description of a candle and its many benefits and uses. Mist of us look better by candlelight! I liked the humorous twist at the end. That was clever. Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022

Thanks, Wendy, for the kind words and high rating.
Joan

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

One always could, and perhaps sometimes should, avert your eyes before you are forced to realize that the march of time has left its footsteps all over your care worn face.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022

Hi Nomi,
Thanks for your interesting comments.
Joan

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

This is well written and descriptive.
I did know it was a candle being described, but other readers will appreciate your author note.
I would consider adding an image, photo or drawing maybe.
This would add dimension to your writing.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022

Thanks, K.L., for reading and reviewing my poems. I will think about your idea of finding artwork for my poem.
Joan

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-You do a good job with the poem, Joan.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You have many good examples showing
this "item of wick and wax."
-I also like the line about lightening one's soul.
-A good concluding couplet, too.
-Good job with the potlatch topic!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022

Thank you, Pam, for your thorough review.
Joan

reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Apr-2022

You are welcome, Joan.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Congratulations on having your poem Recognized. This was lovely and a little humorous. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it here! Best wishes.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022

Thanks a lot, Jessi.
Joan

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

A candle, wonderful!
A unique 'potlatch' contribution!
Reminds me to find my candles, just
in case.
I enjoyed the riddle if this interesting poem.
Blessings...

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021

Thannks, Irish, for reading and reviewing my poem. I am glad you liked it.
Joan

reply by Irish Rain on 28-Oct-2021

Have a nice weekend!!

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Hahaha...no one wants to look bad. I do think though that I look better in candlelight, at least thats what I've convinced myself of. I just stay away from mirrors and the problem is solved. Thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021

Thanks, Boogienights, for the review. I stay away from mirrors too.
Joan