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Bested By a Brat History Rewriter

Truth in America may be leaking away thru our schools

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Comment from giraffmang
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Whilst there is a lot of truth in this, it does open up a whole can of worms! lol

We believed things because they were written in books and taken as fact, nowadays it's on the TV on internet, but is it really any different?

Things taken as fact have been proven wrong before:

E doe snot = MC squared (it isn't a constant, it only applies in certain circumstances)...

The earth has in fact more than one moon...

Weapons of Mass Destruction did not exist in Iraq (never found)

The Earth was flat.

Ghandi was in fact a wife beater and racist to boot.

Mandela was planting bombs - a terrorist tactic.

Mother Teresa was really interested in pushing the Catholic faith and converting and money was syphoned off...

People used to believe politicians were honest... I doubt the founding fathers were as saintly as people like to think - slave owners...

"Did not!". - delete the full stop from the end here.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
    Thanks for reviewing. You are always interesting. Could it be there was truth and error in the past just as there is today? It seems we are all prone to take sides and not see ourselves as participants in the struggle, but spectators in the stands, above all and merely applauding our favorites slugging it out in the arena far below.
    Me thinks we should be aware of a higher tier where sets a Divine Spectator. Blessings, Dennis
reply by giraffmang on 06-Jan-2018
    I think you're right, Dennis. We're all just sitting in the cheap seats. Only one best seat in town and up high...
    G
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
    :)
Comment from lyenochka
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Delightfully retold! I do think we need to keep good dialogue up all across different generations. It's so important to keep communication lines open to be able to speak of deeper truths than historical discussions.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
    Thank you for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Well analytic, historical mistake pronounced by a kid school goer about a president, might be misinformed, author of this story feels disappointed at the term of teaching; well said. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    Yup! Thanks!
Comment from patcelaw
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Dennis,, I am not sure what they are being taught, but I can bet about 75% of it has been changed from what we were taught during the dark ages when we were in school. LOL Patricia

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    Oh yeah, sadly, you got that right. In some cases they are being encouraged to experiment to see if they are a boy or girl. We do need to pray The the children. Thanks for reviewing and God bless you, Dennis
Comment from damommy
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What a cheeky little girl. I think she just liked to show off and cause an argument.

That last line was a beaut. It summed it all up in one sentence.

I wonder a lot about what they're teaching in schools these days. It all seems so different than when I was young. Oh, well. Time passes. 8-)

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    Yes, they are now teaching kids to experiment and see if they were meant to be a boy or a girl. Pray for our young.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This is excellent A confrontation between a third-grade teacher and his stubborn student. I am willing to accept the cherry tree story, but even Tom Brady couldn't throw a silver dollar across the Patomic.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    Yeah, me too! Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Joy Graham
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This is cute, Deniz :) I love the picture of the precocious third grader. I'm always amazed when Ellen DeGeneres has these smart kids on her show and they know incredible trivia about Presidents and sports. I don't do that stuff with my kids and grandkids. Sometimes I think maybe I should???

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    Thanks Joy, appreciated. Enjoy and love them as I?m sure you do. They need all the help they can get but they often don?t know it yet. God bless.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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It's enough to make you want to kneel in the snow and pray for our country...
This last line was the best bringing the whole piece together and it worked very well. I enjoyed both the humour and the awful truth of this write. I worry so much about the future. I don't have children but if I did I would be so worried for theirs. well done this is excellent work Kindest regards Meia x

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    Thank you and I agree with you for the young people. We can pray for them and love them. God bless you.
Comment from robyn corum
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Deniz,

Did she have anything in particular that she was referencing or was she just speaking in general?? Just to be argumentative? Very entertaining, D. I enjoyed! Thank you!

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    Thanks Robyn...she was just repeating what her very liberal parents had gone out of their way to instill in her. God bless
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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An interesting and amusing bit here.
Well written, well told, well done.
And the picture posted here is a good match.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
    Thank you!