Carpenters
5-7-5 Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from nordicgirl
You sneaked this one by me darn it and I love it. I love the message of this, the obvious , of course, but really the way it means US and how we build walls between each other. Right? NG
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You sneaked this one by me darn it and I love it. I love the message of this, the obvious , of course, but really the way it means US and how we build walls between each other. Right? NG
Comment Written 08-Jan-2018
Comment from humpwhistle
A wall can be a blessing. Or a curse. It often depends on which side you stand.
Some walls protect. Some confine. Some do both.
Sans your notes, I can interpret this poem many ways.
The sacking of Rome, is one example.
I'm probably in the minority, but I think short form poems are predicated on
'completeness'. Therein is the challenge.
One man's opinion.
Peace, Lee
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A wall can be a blessing. Or a curse. It often depends on which side you stand.
Some walls protect. Some confine. Some do both.
Sans your notes, I can interpret this poem many ways.
The sacking of Rome, is one example.
I'm probably in the minority, but I think short form poems are predicated on
'completeness'. Therein is the challenge.
One man's opinion.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing contest.
Well done, and well said.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing contest.
Well done, and well said.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
