Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Ricky,

And, as my Sullen and Swollen Heart in Pain...
"Finally Bursts...
"I now Realize...
"The Dreaded *Worst...
...

Beautifully eloquent words to describe your pain and loss, my friend. So sorry for the things you've had to go through. Thanks for shairng.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018

Robin I've grown immensely since 2003 bulimia it knocked my world and three years later they even try to take my life only two years after my wife to successfully so believe me I can remember but it doesn't bother me any more time heals all thanks for your time and wonderful review dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Yvonne North

Exceptional

This is so beautiful, lyrical and gentle. You were definitely inspired. The entire poem is gentle and I think I will sleep well tonight. Thank you for sharing. Y

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018

Thanks Yvonne and appreciate the six dr. Ricky 1024 have a healthy happy and wonderful writing New Year

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

A loss that one cant endure but also a promise of being able to see that person later in life when the time is correct and the promise is ready

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018

Thanks Barb I'm looking forward to reviewing your work as well as allowing you to review my work this new coming 2018 Year Ricky

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I like the lines "The beauty from the Azure of blue, the puffy clouds now comfort you," is a beautiful line that reflects what is feels like in heaven. Your poem is comforting and positive.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018

Thank you Elaine mermaid for your kind review and thought I and I hope you have a wonderful and healthy New Year and a wonderful and successful writing year here at our site called fanstorycom directly 1024

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Very well said about the ultimate gift, but in a disgust, at pains of losing only son, and asks God to end pain; well done; feeling and sentiment expressed naturally. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018

Thanks and there are now...
Three parts.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today