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For the Love of Animals

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This is going to be about my animals that I love

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Comment from Dean Kuch
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"What is that all about(,) sister?" ... Need a comma where indicated, Teri.
When I was still married we had 21 stray cats that we fed and watered and allowed to stay in a room edition built off the back deck.
My ex-wife's idea, not mine. I'm wasn't all that fond of her little feline friends.
Still, with three dogs in the house, I can see where you were coming from here.
Who knows what thoughts go through our pets minds?
~Dean

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
    Thank you Dean for the great review and helpful comments. I bet you loved those fur babies too! I do love the pictures of you and your dog now! Blessings, Teri
reply by Dean Kuch on 04-Jan-2018
    You're welcome, Teri.
    Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from royowen
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I like the great interplay between the four legged members of your family. As a proud parent to many four legged people I know that they all have that they all have unique personalities, well done. Teri, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
    Thank you Roy for the great review and very nice comments! Blessings, Teri
reply by royowen on 04-Jan-2018
    Welcome Teri
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

This is a nice little piece. personally I think cats are much more self-centred and fussy than this...lol

What is that all about sister?" - should probably have a commas before sister for direct addressing.


 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
    Thank you for the great review and very nice comments. I think you are true my friend. They were just being nice at that moment! Thanks for the help also! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Good morning, Teri: This is a cute fictional story. Yes, we do realize that cats can't talk to each other. I love it that you have based a story line on the cats showing, of course , that you do care how they may feel. You have given them a voice and thoughts and included an owner who did mention their concern for the cats and what they may be thinking so good job with this cat story, good job!

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very nice comments. We do love our fur babies and care very much about them! love, Teri
Comment from MelB
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Hi Teri, they are so cute! This is a great write for the Animal Crackers event. I don't know about the reading minds part, but I swear my cats know exactly what I'm saying.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
    lol Thanks for the great review and nice comments. I agree with you. Cats are very smart and know how we actually feel at times it seems! love, Teri
Comment from CD Richards
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Are you sure about the not being able to read minds bit, Teri?

This is a cute story. I can see how Fluffy and Muffy would be put out - cats tend to be quite possessive of their human slaves! I'm just thinking, if Feisty had been called Tuffy, that could have been really confusing!

Great job, thanks for sharing.

Craig

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
    lol Thanks so much Craig for the great review and sweet comments. It made me laugh as I read it. They are quite comical little furry babies! Blessings, Teri
Comment from c_lucas
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Cats are used to being in charge of their domain and don't like to share with others. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very creative read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
    Thank is so very true Charlie. We are finding that out more and more each day. Thanks for the great review and very nice comments! Blessings, Teri
Comment from patcelaw
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Teri, this was a fun read. Your cats are quie bright and the conversation was interesting. I know, I know, cats don't talk and read minds but, you made then do it. Patricia

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
    lol Thank you Patricia for the great review and fun comments. I had fun writing this. This is a picture of Fluffy and Muffy, our twin girls! love, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
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It's exactly how I thought they might react when you brought in the kittens from the cold. It's fun how different their personalities are. It's good that you reassured them of their special place.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much Helen for the great review and very nice comments. They really are sweet cats. They are also twins. They do not like the other cats in the house for real! lol love, Teri
Comment from oliver818
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This is a good entry for the competition. If cats could talk they probably would complain about not getting enough attention. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much for the great review and very nice comments! Blessings, Teri