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Holiday and Holyday Poetry

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religious and holiday poetry

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written New Years poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording with very good colors for the font and great imagery from the art work. I will be 62 in July Good Lord's willing! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
    Dear Teri, Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Celebrate your birthday and have a good time, the new year and a birthday means you will have a great fun, your poem is a tribute for this new year, enjoy, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
    Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments and review. dovemarie
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This is a lovely poem about ringing in the new year.
Well written, well rhymed, well done.
I find the red on green a little bit hard to read though.
Thank you for sharing this one.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
    Dear Sharon, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove P.S. I will change the coloring.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Dove;
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the New Year.

One suggestion; change the red on green. It glares a bit and makes for difficult reading. Enjoyed the rhyme scheme,

~patty~

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
    Dear patty, Thank you for your comments and review. I will change the coloring. Dove