Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written pantoum poem about the telephone poles we literally see every day without taking notice of there existence around us. When we take time to look we see the purpose.

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Like so many things we take for granted. Thank you for a great review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is an awesome poem for anytime Yvonne, You did great from the selection of the topic to the style to the writing. Your repeated lines fit in seamlessly. The story told is perfect. Yes, telephone poles perform admirable job that is seldom though of. This gives readers a great ;look; at something many take for granted. Well done. Jan

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 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thank you. I hoped you'd like it. It wasn't how I set out to write it, but here it is. 8-)