Missing Carol
Living without my sister7 total reviews
Comment from fluffnstuff
Awe..I understand...I lost my only sister three years ago...a year almost to the day of my dad. It is a lonely feeling without them...their laugh etc. good you can express it. Fluff
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
Awe..I understand...I lost my only sister three years ago...a year almost to the day of my dad. It is a lonely feeling without them...their laugh etc. good you can express it. Fluff
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the nice review. I'm so sorry for the loss if your sister...it leaves a void that can never be filled. I appreciate hearing from you.
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Sorry...didn?t mean to repeat myself to you...oops. Fluff
Comment from frogbook
What a lovely tribute to your sister. A very sweet story of the coat. No worries about telling her of your love....she knows. Don't know if this contest is over but this should be a great contender.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
What a lovely tribute to your sister. A very sweet story of the coat. No worries about telling her of your love....she knows. Don't know if this contest is over but this should be a great contender.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for the nice review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry for the Memorial poetry contest. You are lucky to have memories of such a loving sister. It sounds as though you two covered a lot of ground in becoming close after your mother passed.
I hope your memories will hold you until the two of you are reunited in Heaven,
~patty~
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry for the Memorial poetry contest. You are lucky to have memories of such a loving sister. It sounds as though you two covered a lot of ground in becoming close after your mother passed.
I hope your memories will hold you until the two of you are reunited in Heaven,
~patty~
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading my poem and for the kind words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a warm and tranquil write albeit sad and meloncholy, the love you have for your sister will never die and your memories of her will always bring you joy, this poem is superbly written, I wish I had a six for you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
This is a warm and tranquil write albeit sad and meloncholy, the love you have for your sister will never die and your memories of her will always bring you joy, this poem is superbly written, I wish I had a six for you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much, it means a lot to me hearing from a writer that I really admire.
Comment from Trudi Perkins
I loved it. I put my sister
Carson's name in place of your Carol.My oldest sister died of cancer 25 years ago. We had our own special relationship as well. Sometimes it feels like days and not as long as it is. I will never forget her beauty and generosity. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
I loved it. I put my sister
Carson's name in place of your Carol.My oldest sister died of cancer 25 years ago. We had our own special relationship as well. Sometimes it feels like days and not as long as it is. I will never forget her beauty and generosity. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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I'm so sorry for the loss of your sister...not a day goes by that I don't think about carol. Thank you for taking the time to read.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how you miss your dear, lovable and caring sister, you had a good, keen and affectionate relation with your plain, gentle, soft-spoken sister after mother's death. I liked. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
This speaks how you miss your dear, lovable and caring sister, you had a good, keen and affectionate relation with your plain, gentle, soft-spoken sister after mother's death. I liked. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem, I really appreciate it.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a lovely entry for the 'Memorial Poem' writing prompt.
Your emotions and feelings of loss are well felt in the words.
A beautiful picture painted.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
This is a lovely entry for the 'Memorial Poem' writing prompt.
Your emotions and feelings of loss are well felt in the words.
A beautiful picture painted.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reading my poem, and for the kind words.it's
Always appreciated.