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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the past, interesting and fantasy like thought of the past, the past of Ricky's life, he is no more in the coffin after a year, he's in a new place now; I liked the words. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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This speaks the past, interesting and fantasy like thought of the past, the past of Ricky's life, he is no more in the coffin after a year, he's in a new place now; I liked the words. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thanks Al Creator but how many times can Ricky die and come back to life that's the question of the year thanks for this doctor Rickey 1024
Comment from mermaids
Excellent use of words that captures a story of a ghost. The format of the poem is fun to read and you create a clear scene here. I am sure Jason is proud of your poetry.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Excellent use of words that captures a story of a ghost. The format of the poem is fun to read and you create a clear scene here. I am sure Jason is proud of your poetry.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
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Thank you dear Arlene for enjoying this piece and I'm sure that Jason thanks you too I just posted it you're the first review on it so thanks a lot have a nice and healthy happy New Year dr. Ricky 1024 this review is coming through a cell phone would run in sentences impossible grammar and punctuation problems
