Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Haa! She "rang the bloody bell" - you're funny. But this is TOO SCARY FOR CHILDREN, in my opinion, Ricky (but really good for scaring bloodsuckers. LOL!!!) I hope you write more fairy tales.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for your kind review.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hello Ricky. Well you do come up with the most inventive of stories my friend. A vampire that doesn't suck. Then you turn her into an angel. You do know how to trick your reader. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017

Thanks Miss kiwi girl for your kind thoughts and Crissy Live reviews for all my work for the past year doctor Ricky 1024 and has a happy and healthy New Year dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A vampire story with a twist in the tale and a sort of re-born vampire that didn't suck blood! May I make a suggestion Ricky? If you just use inverted comma's for speech only and not throughout your poem, it would make the poem look much more professional? Give it a try. Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017

Thanks for just kind review dollies poems and you have a nice and happy healthy New Year doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from keimosobie

Excellent

Well I guess she made the ultimate sacrifice.
So she stops sucking and she is immediately forgiven for the countless other victims is that it? Well god could have cured her and saved her the trouble of having to suck.

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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017

Thanks for your review.
Dr Ricky 1024

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. Ricky, Ricky, why are you writing this weird stuff now? You used to write the most lovely stories about your son, Jason. This kind of writing is totally alien from what you wrote before. It is well-written, though.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

I'm always messing up I actually out of 10 homes 50 to 60% or about Jason so I don't want to bore public with my hard past life it's okay to journal it but some people like you enjoyed other people probably get tired of it just a thought dr. Ricky 1024 and thanks for the review

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

This, Ricky, is a fun and wicked parody of â??True Blood.â?? I love the characters you put in this:

"This is Annie...
"Annie Oakley the greatest, female Sharpshooter West of this Dem Dare Mississippi!"

You even take a bite out of FanStorians who give you negative reviews:

"And, I'm sure this will Fascinate all of you 'Blood Suckers' out there and we know who you are!"
"You exist with your two and three-star reviews!"

Now this is something I have never seen before:

"As a New and First-Time Vampire Angel!"
"Whom Didn't Suck!"

I look forward to your next installment of this creative tale. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Thanks sis cat sounds like you've had a couple one and two stars in your career here also talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the introductory introduction of a Children's Fairytale, of four characters to play their role and cause events, all in the progress, to enjoy the Vampyire activities; I liked. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Thanks Al Creator as always talk to Ricky 1024