Comment from antonieta

Excellent

Hi,
I enjoyed reading your story. A very good story, I must say. It reads very well, and it hooks the reader from the first line and its message is also important.
Thanks for sharing,
Antonieta

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading.

Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was indeed rather interesting. It had a wonderful build up but then left one hanging- what exactly was happening between Cora and John. You provided some great details with the build up. Very enjoyable, thanks Maria.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

I forgot to say that this is to be continued...
Thanks for reading.

reply by aryr on 29-Dec-2017

Ahaaa, now that sure does make sense, I will definitely watch for it. You are so welcome Maria.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is an interesting story that is well written and a pleasure to read. I do however hope there will be a continuation to the story. May you have a Happy New Year. Patricia

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Yes, I have already started the second chapter...
Thanks for reading.