Comment from RGstar

Excellent

The repeating phrase cements strength and depth, almost prayer-like.

A nice entry. Abstract but nicely so.
Good luck with this.
My best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

Thanks for reading, Roy.

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Exceptional

Maria: I do believe you have shown the world many things
to ponder on. We can watch the clouds, snow, flowers, stars
and know that God created for us to enjoy. Beautiful poem
for the contest. Have a blessed New Year. flylikeaneagle - nancy

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Thanks for your kind review and generous rating. Happy New Year to you too.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Maria, this is a lovely faith poem for the contest. I wish you good luck in the contest. I really do like your simple and to the point style. Blessings. Patricia

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks for your review, Patricia.

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

A sweet little poem Maria. I really like the innocence and sincerity of your words in your poetry. I like the repetition of the line 'Have faith in thee" Thanks for sharing Maria

dip

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks once again for your support, Mark.

Comment from smileycloud

Exceptional

a beautiful free verse poem of faith
good luck with this very fine entry in the contest
it is lovely how all the wonders which God supplies and unfolds to us lead to the repeating chorus
very fine work
blessings
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Wow! Thanks for your kind review and generous rating.
You made my day.

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

Well said, but I could barely hear you. Then I went for well written, and bingo!.(L' Espagna is far away, I'm having a clowney day)
Seriously, I thought it was a lovely spiritual poem. I wish you the best for the contest. I think you have a winner.
Hugs Trisha

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

I'm glad you liked it, Trisha.
Thanks for reading.

reply by Bucketlist on 29-Dec-2017

You are welcome

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

When you have faith and hope to cling on to, at least you have something.
And having something is much better than having nothing at all.
A very interesting poetic proclamation portraying your faith, Maria.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading, Dean.

reply by Dean Kuch on 29-Dec-2017

My pleasure, Maria.

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Good morning, Maria: I really enjoyed this spiritual poem entry for this Faith Poetry contest. You have mentioned some of the beautiful things that help to strengthen our faith in Thee. The snow flakes caught on the tree, the babbling brooks, the cotton clouds, the burning sun, very nicely done, Maria and once again this is a great entry.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Tier.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a nicely worded faith poem. To have gratitude is the best prayer we can give. These are my favorite lines:
"The babbling brook
Reflects my face,
The winter wind
Tousles my hair."
Such good imagery here. Nicely done.
Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading, Marilyn.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a face poetry writing prompt which in theme as well as imagery red well flowed well with no grammar issues I checked you an object of contents were firmly in place in to trip to measure for perfectly aligned thanks for dissing good luck in the faith contest dr. Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017

Thanks for reading.