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FanStory 'Top Ten' racing to finish

Top Ten for 2017/ Well done

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Comment from dragonpoet
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These are very good writers. All deserving of their ranks because their poems are well written and you can't fail to enjoy them.

I think line eight should be Patcelaw's stayin, not leavin.

Keep writing fun poems like this one.

Happy New Year.

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Hi dragonpoet, Thanks for taking the time to read and review this poem written in fun and also seriously acknowleding these writers .There are also many Many excellent poet and authors who write fabulous work and I have enjoyed being here and have learnt so much and appreciate every review. Thanks for you tip and Have made a change but spelt leavin with an e instead. Cheers Christine Happy New Year to you too
reply by dragonpoet on 28-Dec-2017
    You're welcome. We are here to help and support each other.

    Joan
Comment from Poetic Friend
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The top ten poets deserve to leave the pack. They are all prolific (especially Dip. He posts two poems each day) and fine poets. I look forward to reading their posts.

Unfortunately, only the top five receive trophies. I think they all deserves trophies.

I love your usage of rhymes.

Have a Happy New Year!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Hi Poetic Friend. Thanks for your read and have made some small changes and hopefully it reads even better now LOL I do that sometimes revise when I think about a better line. But I do apreciate your time and yes these poets are all great and it is a shame can't all receive a trophy.Have a Happy New Year and may we all enjoy 2018 here on FS Cheers Christine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks the pride and fun, fear of gun, the race of the poets is on and finishes a series with rank of top ten of the poet Fanstorians, well done, no hesitation to be the one. DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Hi Alcreator Litt Dear. Thanks for reading my poem a fun piece to acknowledge these atop Ten and well deserved places too. They all work hard to be and stay there. Have a Great New Year and may we enjoy all the poets work in 2018 Cheers Christine
Comment from Dean Kuch
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You could always simply write Corum, Robyn, with a comma to make her name grammatically correct, Christine.
Who knows how I got ranked as highly as I did. The sort of stuff I write doesn't exactly evoke those warm and fuzzy feelings.
In reality, I'm not all that prolific either, posting perhaps four times a week--if that.
I'll be abstaining from the "rat race" next year as my participation at FanStory will slowly start to wane.
Come the first of the year, I'm concentrating my efforts outside of FS, where they pay real, honest to goodness money for poetry and stories.
Well see what happens.
Take care of yourself, and have a Happy New Year.
~Dean


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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Hi Dean, Thanks so muc for reading and sometimes I am so stupid that I cant seecthe wood for the trees I have just put Robyns name around correctly as it still fits in with the next line which I have also changed to make it work even betrer LOL . Sometimes I do this and then go back and make changes if I think up a better line Ha Ha.
    I will never be in the Top Ten as I cannot write quickly enough and to be honest I simply cant affort the cost of trying to promote my work. As it is it cost me $36 Australian dollars to buy 25 Fanstory' Dollars 'which do not go far when promoting ones work.
    i would also like nothing better to do than be able to spend all my time writing poetry and short stories but unfortunately I have to also work and have other things in my busy life to take care of so Time for me is a precious element.and I only write when I can afford to do so and have spare time.
    I do hope you stay and write sometimes as you provide excellent work and I really enjoy your jonre' and have found your poem always amazing. Good luck with your other endevours though and hopefully you can make some good money with your skill.

    I wrote this poem in good fun and hope it is taken in the lighthearted way it was meant to be bit also acknowledging all the great Top Ten poets here. Of course there are many more fabulous writers not in the Top Ten. ( I am number 64 LOL) and will probably stay there forever HA Ha so my line to be number one was firmly tongue in cheek .

    Anyway Dean enough of my ravings. Again well done to be and stay number two and All the best for 2018 Have a very Happy New Year and catch you on the flip side mate Cheers Christine