Night Patrol
A kitten becomes a cat5 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is nothing funny, it is fantastic, after all it is a fantasy but very realistically flavoured, this story is a pack of entertainment, you have fulfilled, the cat Katy's want, he is now no more kitten by act a cat; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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This is nothing funny, it is fantastic, after all it is a fantasy but very realistically flavoured, this story is a pack of entertainment, you have fulfilled, the cat Katy's want, he is now no more kitten by act a cat; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Happy New Year.
rikki66
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent story of farm animals and their little society. I thought your developement of the main character was fine and the interaction between all of them was fun to read. Well done. Regards.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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Excellent story of farm animals and their little society. I thought your developement of the main character was fine and the interaction between all of them was fun to read. Well done. Regards.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the kind review, Happy New Year.
rikki66
Comment from R56Ma3
A very good children's story about a kitten who is being a cat on a mission to keep the mice away from the farm house. Thanks for sharing it is very well done. R56ma3
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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A very good children's story about a kitten who is being a cat on a mission to keep the mice away from the farm house. Thanks for sharing it is very well done. R56ma3
Comment Written 27-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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Your review is most welcome, Happy New Year.
rikki66
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Happy New Year!
Comment from BeasPeas
I think this is an interesting story for children of all ages. I like the names you've given the animals and describing their interactions and conversation with each other. Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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I think this is an interesting story for children of all ages. I like the names you've given the animals and describing their interactions and conversation with each other. Marilyn
Comment Written 27-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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May the child always ling in all of us. Happy New Year.
rikki667
Comment from Ricky1024
Mike Patrol was well-written rich and seem as well as imagery it flowed well right well when I grammar issues I checked of an object to Compton tents were excellent strip the measures in place dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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Mike Patrol was well-written rich and seem as well as imagery it flowed well right well when I grammar issues I checked of an object to Compton tents were excellent strip the measures in place dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 27-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
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Your review is most welcome. Happy New Year.
rikki66
